Owen! Excelent chapter. I love the way you are able to bring the siblings' relationships to life. It's truly realistic. Wouldn't happen to have any experience with siblings...? Obviously!

I'm glad you have started to draw the goblins into your story. I have been waiting for the adventure to begin...

Hmmm... Death Boy... I it! I also like how you pointed out the fact that girls only have to be told something once... whereas boys...*cough... cough...* Well... You know.. don't! You are so right!

BTW, Connie has some very good questions that should be answered!

I look forward to your next chapter.
Katie