04-06-2010, 05:06 AM
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Nogtail
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Cherrinell Baron First Year x3
| JayMay ♥ Big, yellow duckie <3 Quote:
Originally Posted by SenoritaMaxie Chapter 4: Quiescent Materials Love the name. REALLY creatiiveeee!! Quote:
– the Dark Lord, the Cruciatus Curse, those were, perhaps, only the beginning.
He has had some dark moments in his past, hadn't he? I wonder how they've contributed to shaping his personality. Quote:
“To keep your mouth shut about this,” Draco pointed to a bead of sweat that trickled down his neck and, as the saleswizard’s hands closed round the neck of the satchel, strode from the room in a swirl of black cloak.
That's very Draco. And of course it tells the way 'the rich' work. Great bit, all in all. Quote:
It was, finally, with a sigh that he stepped out of the bathroom, a white towel – yes, white -- even Narcissa wondered, when more frustrated at him than usual, why he did not dye his towels black when he could not bear clothes of a different colour – wrapped round his torso, his usually immaculate white-blonde hair a little tousled and very wet.
I can SOOOO imagine Draco in a white towel. Quote:
It fell into his eyes; the pale, very whitish-blonde tinge of the former standing out against the cold, cold grey of the latter in a way that would have made Narcissa roll her eyes, because she knew he would want to flaunt it.
OMGERZ! Maxerz! This is just BRILLIANT!! Quote:
He looked good, he knew, in the clothes he had selected, the black of the T-shirt highlighting the steel-grey of his eyes, and bringing out the blonde of his hair.
You're outdoing your own self chicka! I love the way you've described Draco it's brilliant!! Quote:
It was Braine, their house-ghost, who had once been an influential Malfoy himself.
I laik that idea! Very stately and Malfoyish. Especially when the ghost has such perfect English. Quote:
The flames died, the voice faltered into nothingness, and where the remains of the burnt envelope should have been, glowed a tiny spark of black-purple that slowly died down into cold silence.
OMG!!!
What does she want with Draco?
I SO WANT TO KNOW!!!!!!
PAMS! PAMS! PAMS!
Love,
~~Jay~~
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