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Excellent chapter! I can't wait until the relationships get a little older... if they're allowed to get a little older.
That, I'm afraid, they're keeping me in the dark about..
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I also look forward to the goblin conflict; I can't wait for the next chapter. Better get pen to paper soon..
Might be a while for that too - we are, after all, only a few chapters in.. Though there will be some action fairly soon..
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By the way Owen, if you don't want me guessing please let me know. I'm not expecting answers to my questions. I just try to figure stories as I go along.
I don't have a problem with people guessing at all - tells me if I've done something particularly well, see..
It's always a pleasure to hear where others think the story will lead..
