03-31-2010, 12:12 PM
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| Nogtail
Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: Middle of nowhere
Posts: 4,526
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Cherrinell Baron
First Year  x3
|  JayMay ♥ Big, yellow duckie <3
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Originally Posted by SenoritaMaxie  Chapter 2:
The Lies That Lurk in Kisses  Quote: "Oh! Might I kiss those eyes of fire,
A million scarce would quench desire;
Still would I steep my lips in bliss,
And dwell an age on every kiss;
Nor then my soul should sated be,
Still would I kiss and cling to thee:
Nought should my kiss from thine dissever,
Still would we kiss and kiss for ever." Eeeeppp! I LOVE your selections luvvlehh!!
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"But green would look lovely on you, Draco,” Narcissa Malfoy insisted.
OMG! 
That is soooo drool-worthehhh when you imagine itt!!
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“Mother!”
The word was sudden, his intonation sharp as it was not very often, and Narcissa fell silent.
Still the Draco that commands a certain sort of respect? I liked this bit. It was a good way to introduce what you're getting at.
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but the man need not know that.
That was very Draco.
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There was something insolent, even mocking, about his tones - it was as if he believed that no woman on Planet Earth could resist him; and he probably did believe that -
I would say replace the probably with a 'certainly.'
But that's why we love hiM! 
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The saleswitch stepped away. “Sweet dreams, Master Malfoy,” she said softly, very softly. “You were too easy.”
He should so have hurt that! His ego would have.......... greatly suffered. *shakesez head*
You know I love what you write!
So PAMS! PAMS! PAMS!!
Love,
~~Jay~~
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