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I hope this chapter meets your expectations.
Not to worry! I never doubted for a minute that it would. I'm just so glad it's finally here!
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Unceremoniously shoving his wife and son into the kitchen and ignoring Hermione's indignant 'tut', Ron immediately spoke to Harry, "Hey mate, you look terrible. What's up?"
The fact that this was so casual made it even more hilarious!
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." Ron paused to gather his thoughts, "Bill says the goblins are acting a little weird. He thinks you may need to bring your next meeting with Griphook forward.."
Harry's frown deepened, "I would but he's also been acting stranger recently, to the point that I'm not sure I can trust him. Thank Bill for the tip off though will you?"
It's neat the way they are still after all these years from when they were in school sill the same. I love how you've kept them the same but obviously matured in their logic. Thinking things through, looking at the whole picture. Even though Bill sees them acting a little wierd, and suggests moving forward, Harry also sees that as a potential hazard or something. But still thanking Bill, shows he is taking what Bill says into consideration. I think you are a master at writing, and I'm happy to read your work.
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Ginny saw his back, covered in fading black leather and long, black hair that fell to where she guessed his shoulder blades were.
What struck her more was the goblins attitude toward him; different to anything she'd seen before - and she was well versed in their different attitudes as a result of coming from a poor family and now being part of a rich one - but she had never seen the mix of respect and fear? they showed toward this boy.
My first thought was, could this be a descendant of the Black Family? Maybe a grandson of the evil B.L.
I might of only caught a glimps of his profile, cause I was a stowaway at the meeting, but I wonder...
By the way Owen, if you don't want me guessing please let me know. I'm not expecting answers to my questions. I just try to figure stories as I go along.