Ottery St.Catchpole,
Excellent FF! My new friend, Connie told me about you, and I spent an afternoon reading. I think I may have missed a few key points in my hurry to see what would happen next, but intend to go back and reread, after I give one of your earlier FF a quick read.

You're a great writer, and I really look forward to your next post. I might even be knowledgeable enough, by then, to put my two cents in.
Katie, your newest fan!