Sorry about missing your last post. I don't know what happened. Anyway, great couple of posts. About everythings been commented on which is great cause it shows how much everyone loves everything about your story like me. I will say this though:
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For the ball, I was going with Adriana, James was fawning over Lily, and Peter was, well, Peter. But Remus? For a while, I hadn’t really thought about it, and he never said anything about it.
Not much is said about Adriana, I'm glad he's taking her still, with all the girls flirting with him, it's a wonder he can keep his head screwed on right.
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Because for once I was paying attention, I noticed the very subtle wink that Melissa gave Remus, and I saw him smile.
How cute of him to notice. I bet he would have caught that though even if he hadn't been paying attention. And for Remus, I'm so happy! I hope he doesn't end up with a broken heart.
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There was a chance – no, actually, there wasn’t. There was no way I was just imagining things, something was going on that I didn’t know. Naturally, I wanted to know.
I love how you write Sirius! He is so adorable!
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“Clearly I’m missing something.” I said bluntly. I wasn’t going to beat around the bush.
Remus smiled. “I suppose you’re right.” He agreed.
And then he opens up about it, and we get to find out the details? No we don't because it was the end of the post.
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Okay, so yes, I am evil.
Very true, very true. Yes, we probibly know, but it's fun reading it.
Great posts, I enjoy reading your story so much! Keep up the great work!