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Old 03-23-2010, 03:53 AM   #45 (permalink)
Winter Dreams
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Originally Posted by SenoritaMaxie View Post
Chapter 1:
The Taken Road
YAY. Love the chapter title. xD

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She loved her hair. It was the kind of red few people naturally had and, brushing back deep scarlet bangs, Ginevra Weasley bent down, picked up her new dress off the bed, and began to fold it.
Wonderful description, so pretty.

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“I was wondering,” and Molly hesitated. “You’ve always wanted to go to France… my dear doll…” and she pulled a very surprised Ginny to herself, and stroked her hair. “You can, you know, of course it’s going to be difficult –”
I can't believe I haven't mentioned it yet.

Ginny + Maxie's writing + FRANCE. I can't imagine anything better. Oh, I forgot to mention Malfoy. I am seriously in love with France SO much.

I wish I could go there so bad. AND I'm learning French. xD

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“You are delirious,” Ginny said firmly. She couldn’t bear Muriel in her own home, how the HECK did her mother think she would bear Muriel in the old hag’s home? The idea was ridiculous… and yet she felt a silent, gnawing sort of hunger she hardly ever felt. Ginny pushed it to the back of her mind, and faced her mother with a resolute face. “I am staying RIGHT here, and Aunt Muriel is NOT going to have me kicked out of my own house, and sent to hers, and –”
HAHA. This just made me laugh.

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“I’ll go, mum.”
YAY.


Awesome post, MyMaxshie. I NEED moar.
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