Angie, I'm new to commenting to your fantastic story. I'll say this, that, what first caught my interest, was the title, "Apostallo", (following from, like Apostles - followers of Christ; stall- the act to deceive) So what I get from that is this story is about followers of someone acting and wanting to deceive. :litebulb:Am I correct? From the huge numbers of views and posts you have, I figured this had to be more than just a story about lovers betrayals, and the such. Which I'm glad because I don't like those stories normally. So I’m thinking should I read yes or no. I decided to check it out. Right away I was hooked. I wondered who your betrayer was going to be, I had my suspicions, then when Ginny, right away was suspicious, then I agreed with her. And so happy to realize I’m right! Uh-oh, I’m starting to get long winded here. I’ll wrap it up in saying you are a very clever writer, and I so much enjoy reading your story. Great post, and hope the next one won’t take long to get here. And I won’t say so much from now on.