Hello Kerri xx, I've been reading from the beginning and I think it's about time I post a comment. Your story keeps getting progressivly better with each post.
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" No he's my way of getting what I need. He's friends with Harry Potter and he will tell me if I ask about him." I lied swiftly
Whew
that was some pretty quick thinking.
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I leaned agains the tree tears pouring down my face as I thought of all the people I had now put in danger. I was really starting to like all of Nevilles friends even though I had never had a proper conversation with them.
I feel badly for her. Hope she can get out of this ok. Maybe she chould confide in them. Maybe they can help her. I'm not making suggestions here. It's just the way I read. Try to solve problems as I go along. Makes it fin, especially if my thoughts turn out to be the way the writer chooses to write it.
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Who would I choose to die?
I'll be watching for your next post.