My sweet love, your story continues to amuse, enrapture and capture my attentions ... and In the fire forged isn't half bad either *smoochies*
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Luna sidled up next to him, giving him a sweet smile which melted his insides
Cute.
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He swallowed hard, yearning to hold her close.
I can relate ... oh Neville you're too cute ... *tackleglompsNevs*
I wish I hadn't killed you off ... Quote:
Vaguely he wondered what she used to wash her hair, then took himself firmly in hand. He’d never be able to resist her if her sat around wondering why she smelled so good.
The adorableness continues. Neville is too cute. I love the way you write him, a statement I'm sure I've said umpteen numbers of times. It's just his nervousness around girls just goes so well with his new found ... self-reliance in the face of Death Eaters running the school. Its somewhat reminiscent of Harry's bum-kicking attitude up until book 4 where he's all melty and lovey around Cho.
Just goes to show you, saving the world is still easier than asking a girl out! *fires the cannons*
I loved your whole post and I hope you add more soon, love.
Happy Saint Valentine's Day btw, better early than late I always say.
