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Evangeline Hermione 
Im already disliking their father, sorry to say, leaving them!!! What a way to come back into there lives....
Anyway other then that i thought his chapter(part 1 of course) was great, and i cant what till part 2
mmmm....Wonder whats gunna happen
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Thank you so much! Part 2 isn't nearly as long, but it should be interesting enough (at least I hope). I am not a fan of John either... But I think it is very courageous that he finally stepped up (even if it was out of desperation). :
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bonnieginnyfan1 Great chappie! I really like the great effort and detail put into this! Your a very talented writer!
That you so much! That means a lot!
