KellyBear, but this is wonderful! The setup is important, and at the sametime terrific. I'm not disappointed at all, I just can't wait till your next post.
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Neville smiled gratefully up at her, scooped up his books and headed for what was to be the first in a long string of bad experiences.
I can't believe how well this ties in with JK's book. It bothered me that the little explanation she gave was to convince us why Neville was all the sudden all taking charge, telling Aberforth what to do, sending messages, figuring out umm something about the Room Of Requirements, and lots of other stuff. Even Harry noticed it. When he saw Nevelle and Wood umm doing something, Harry noticed how old Neville looked.(this is tough talking about this and not giving spoilers) Don't get me wrong, I love her work, I just think she didn't setup, like your doing. Getting to read this part of the story makes her story make perfect since. I better stop now. Great post. I'll be watching my e-mail for notice on your next post.