Thread: Harry Potter: Human Nature ... - Sa13+
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Old 01-08-2010, 01:30 PM   #235 (permalink)
Connie
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Hogwarts RPG Name:
Janet Lynn Gordon
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Werecats are people too! Reader of Fan Fictions

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“Get back or the next one’s a hex!” the boy threatened.

The disguise fell like a cloak, disappearing in smoke at the man’s feet. “You think you’re a smart one do you, boy?”
I love how smart Harry is in this story. They should have gotten you to write Harry in the HBP movie.
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Harry knew he couldn’t keep them all at bay for long but he would try.
I love Harry's determination to survive.
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He didn’t like talking cats, those pesky things were always trouble. Maxie sighed wondering if the nasty curious little beast had been snooping in his possessions.
And then, he proceeds to snoop in everyone's trunks. So funny!
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Look everyone, SS borrowed my siggy idea
At least we don't have evil Santa greeting us anymore.
I love your story, and if you read it straight through, the train ride isn't too long. I guess it seems like a long time because of periods of time without any posts. I like the train ride. It's exciting, sad, funny, scary, dark... Everything I need to make me want to read more. Watching for your next post.
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