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Old 12-31-2009, 12:46 PM   #11 (permalink)
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What a sweet little story, harita. I had been trying to think of another song you could do like the Taylor Sift one, but I couldn't think of any. This one-shot was really nice, and I really enjoyed it. Thank you, for letting me know.
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Snape sighed as he saw Lily storm off from the ground but internally he was jubilant. From the day he had lost his Lily completely for calling her mudblood he had sworn to himself that he would never come in her way again but he had also promised that he wouldn’t let anyone get together with her.
This part made me wonder if Snape started the rumers. Maybe he saw them bump into each other, or one of them casually speaking to the other.
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His face turned blank from his mischievous smile as he noticed Lily standing there stunned at looking him and Cheryl together.
Could Snape have modified his memory?
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He whispered something in Cheryl’s ear and then walked ahead before she could answer him back.
No, even with a memory modificstion, this isn't justified. I think he was two timing Lily. I bet Snape helped it along somehow though. Great little story. I hope you do some more writing. Let me know if you do.
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