I'm glad to hear you're alright and not frozen luff
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I think his mom wasn't a trusting person and taught her son Occlumency to protect him from people finding out what he is, and to shield him from his father.
Oh, i seeee! But then, did his dad really hit him?
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Teddy and you have a big role in chapters 12 "Narrow Escapes And Narrow Rescues" & 13 "And What Of Neville?"
You shouldn't have told me the chapter numbers
Now I'm going to be badgering you to post even more than now
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Lily was in such good spirits for not having anyone human to talk to all summer, but confiding in Tom was good enough.
This sentence was kinda confusing
It would have been easier to understand if you had left out the 'such'.
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Originally Posted by Snively
“My skin crawled every time they touched me. Whenever I ate there, I had to will myself not to get sick, and I never did like anything about Tuney,” he mocked her little girl voice. When she told him that it was her daddy’s wrist watch, a very personal gift a father leaves his son, Severus answered, “Lily, there’s not a single thing in this world that I have to be thankful for, except that I didn’t have to have your daddy for a father. My papa is a worthless piece of scum, but I would take him over your dad anytime. At least he’s a pureblood.” Severus then slammed the door in her face.
WELL NO WONDER SHE DOESN'T LOVE YOU, YOU
Ahem
The idea Lily had for the roses is majorly smart
I didn't think the Protean Charm could be used like that-well, any way other than Hermione's anyway
I love it!
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Originally Posted by Tuney
a brief instant lunged for Lily, and hugged her tight. Be careful of Severus, he is not the same. He is evil I can feel it. I love you. She whispered in her ear.”
o_O What's up with her?
Maybe she just doesn't hate her that much yet?
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His family has money, so I’ll be loved and provided for.” she exclaimed with her nose in the air.
I wouldn't be surprised if she really did marry for money-though I think she did have some feelings for him...she did tell him about Lily after all :/
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Originally Posted by Teehee!
It seems his trunk broke open and all his stuff spilled onto the walkway. Each time Severus would get it all put away and shut, it would spring open and all his stuff would again fly out. James leaned out the window and yelled, “Let me help you Snively!” he waved his wand and the trunk packed itself, and flew aboard the train. Severus ran after it with a great piece cut out of the back of his robes, revealing a dingy pair of underpants.
CLASSIC! Even if I feel bad for him, he deserved that!
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his mighty steed the Iron Horse.
Sounds super cool!
I love this post Connie! It's interesting how we get to see Lily's language change over time as well as Snape's attitude towards her.
Okay, one more
little pokethnessissue. If you read this post over again, you'll notice you misplaces some speech marks
but I still love it and you as well!
PAMS! PAMS! PAMS! <-told you
