12-22-2009, 11:25 PM
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Grindylow
Join Date: Oct 2009 Location: A World of my Own
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Tabitha Lorraine Cauldwell First Year | ♥ Gone but not forgotten ♥ ♥ S.S. Fan ♥ Willowgirl ♥ Excellent work Owen! Magic World needs a good battle within its Fan Fictions!
I truly enjoyed your introduction. Your descriptions were inspiring and very easy to follow. I was sorry to see Gabrielle die so early in the story, but I guess you needed a strong motive for revenge? I have picked my winning side already. I hope, when the story ends, I can say that I picked the winning team!
PAMS!!!
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