OMG, Connie!
I've been meaning to come in here and read your story for the last week.Stupid other stuff getting in the way.Although nothing as severe as what you had!


I'm loving the story.So nice to see something about James/Lily/Severus, before and during Hogwarts.Especially with the little twist of Tom. And that diary entry was just so sweet!
I agree with Ottery's first post about spacing and stuff, it was much better in the latest chapter.My eyesight goes bad with small, bunched up text...so thank you for changing it.

Keep up the good work! I shall be reading.