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It's not bad!  Here's my comments for the two chapters:
Chapter 1: Wow! Tessa is so funny!  I love the way she hates everything and how she's stuck with Orion as Head Boy and Girl of Hogwarts. I couldn't help laughing. I love the suspense you added at the end of the chapter. I love the banner. It looks very good!
Chapter 2: Harry as the new DADA teacher? Wow! That's so cool. I always thought he was fit for the job. And Ginny taking over for Madame Hooch is a very good choice as well. Eep! The Triwizard Tournament! I'm so excited for that!
Trust me, it's not bad. It's very good. Great posts! Loved them! Can't wait for more!
Kita
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