I was on a writing rampage (a 5000 word rampage

) over my little holiday so I actually have three chapters done now I will post Chapter two part one now and add more as people start to read and post replies. I am hoping you like these and wishing for lots of replies so i know what works and what does not.
Thanks in Advance
Chapter 2- Grand Meetings part 1
The room was pale gray blue with golden moldings, over the large window panes hung dark brown and blue tapestries suspended from golden rods. Cassie blinked her green eyes and tried to lift herself up to get a better glance at her surroundings, however her weak body refused to respond choosing to remain in bed instead. From where she lay she could tell that she was nowhere she had ever set foot in but despite the lack of understanding she was surprisingly calm and at ease with the situation. A large fire hissed from within a ornate marble fireplace across from the dark carved four poster bed that she laid in. Cassie heard a light tapping on the door to her right and turned to see a beautiful woman about her mother’s age with long blond hair hanging down her back.
“You have awaken” the blond woman said “I hoped you would wake before sunset” She walked over to the heavy draped windows and pulled the curtains to reveal a large well tended garden backlit with a crimson sunset. “I will be sure to have soup brought up at once for you as you must be hungry” The blond woman crossed over to the bed and placed her fair hand on Cassie’s forehead. After a frown the woman replied in a most melodic voice “ You lost a lot of blood don’t try to get up just yet. You must be confused, all will be explained shortly” with that she gracefully rose off the bed and walked out of the room.
Moments later there was a snapping sound followed by a small kreacher that made Cassie blink twice. “ hello lil’ miss guess you never seen elf kind huh?” the small dirty elf carried a silver tray filled with soup and briskets to the bedside and placed it next to Cassie who’s eyes remained wide.
“ Is not much miss but its better than nuttin’ “ replied the elf helping Cassie to sit up . “ yous lucky nota scratch on ya not so lucky for young Master Malfoy” added the elf shaking her head, grabbing the spoon and holding soup up to Cassie’s lips.
Cassie could feel strength returning with every sip of the golden liquid she drank. Too soon Cassie had finished every drop in the bowl only to reach out and grab a brisket from a gold lined plate. Cassie looked at the elf and asked “ where am I?”
The elf snickered and replied “ you in Malfoy Manor miss, you mean you don’t remember anything miss?”
Before Cassie could ask the elf to explain a tall blond man about the blond woman’s age entered the room clad in a dark cloak lined in fur. Turning to the blond woman he said “ Narcissa insure that she is properly dressed to be received by her Father, he would expect nothing but a grand entrance for his only child.” with that he turned and left Narcissa to the task of dressing Cassie.
Downstairs of the grand Manor a gathering of men had collected in the Malfoy’s main sitting room. A grand marble fireplace stood to the right of the room casting an eerie glow to the scene. In the center of the room sat an ornately carved wooded chair with all other furniture radiating around it. A tall pale man in flowing robes crossed the room and took the position in the ornate chair. With surprising calmness he waited for the other men to take their seats leaving a less ornate chair beside him vacant.
The tall blond man followed by a younger blond man came down the staircase and crossed the room. Stopping a few feet in front of the Pale man they both bowed their heads low.
“ Lucius and Draco thank you for you grand hospitality” with little emotion the Pale man said while directing them to seats in front of the fireplace. ” once again “ he coldly added .
After a moment of silence in which everyone surveyed their surroundings the wild woman with dark hair bounded into the room “ My Lord” she said with passion bowing low but keeping eye contact “ Forgive my tardiness”
“Bellatrix, how could I find any fault in you my most faithful servant” The pale man replied with a nod that directed her to take a seat nearest him but not in the seat directly next to him. “ I welcome the faithful that have returned to me this evening, and give grand thanks to those who have risked beauty for my rising “ he said indicating the arm that Bellatrx had cradled and wrapped in gauze.
Holding up her arm Bellatrix replied with a smile “ It was well worth it My Lord” inching closer to him she added “ I am your most humble servant”
“To those of you who chose to humble yourselves to me will receive great rewards for your service and those who cross me” looking at Draco the pale man added “ you will be punished “ with a pause he scanned the room before continuing “ For too long I have been gone and you my faithful death eaters have allowed the mudblood kind take over all that we purebloods hold dear. My grandfather Salazar would be appalled at the utter thought of the filth that now walks in the Ministry. It is now our job to educate the people of this country and the world of just how supreme we are to the weak muggle and muggle lovers world wide”
The Pale Man then turned his attention toward the figure at the top of the staircase. Cassie stood with a dark green cloak draped over her. Emeralds dripped from her ears and neck. With a slightly bowed head now covered in the hood of the cloak Cassie descended the stairs trying not to make eye contact with the Pale Man in the cent of the room. With more grace than Cassie thought herself capable at that moment she crossed the sitting room towards the Pale Man who had now risen from his chair and walked toward Cassie stopping only inches from Cassie . She immediately dropped to her knees and bowed her head looking at the floor. The pale Man placed his cold hand on her chin and lifted her head he spoke in a voice that all but Cassie and him would understand. “ My Daughter” He hissed “ What have those filthy muggles taught you that you now feel the need to hide your face from me?”
With a puzzled expression obvious on her face Cassie looked with wide eyes into the cold eyes staring back at her, . The Pale Man responded to her questioned expression with words less than comforting “ Your hair is like flames like your muggle mother stand up my child and let my servants look at you” She stood and let him pull back the hood to reveal her long scarlet hair. In speech everyone could hear he declared “ the faithful meet my daughter Cassandra “