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vijaya · 11-25-2009, 01:48 PM

Hey, a poem for me really,
It's lovely, though the last line, but still its lovely.

I really loved these lines:

Quote:

Every tree shall bend to your wishes,
Every mountain, no matter how tall,
The wind will come and whisper,
Sweet songs in your ear.

The water flowing by your feet,
With hushed winter squall,
A chirping bird shall sing now,
A gentle mist rise.

Thanks Arc. it's really good.

Hope you right some more.

Love,
VJ.

11-25-2009, 01:48 PM	#4 (permalink)
vijaya Formerly: leov DMT Mooncalf Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: India (GMT +5.5) Posts: 6,766 Hogwarts RPG Name: Gabriel Bateman First Year x1	«««==I Will Try======Fix You======coldplay==»»» Hey, a poem for me really, It's lovely, though the last line, but still its lovely. I really loved these lines: Quote: Every tree shall bend to your wishes, Every mountain, no matter how tall, The wind will come and whisper, Sweet songs in your ear. The water flowing by your feet, With hushed winter squall, A chirping bird shall sing now, A gentle mist rise. Thanks Arc. it's really good. Hope you right some more. Love, VJ.