11-24-2009, 06:34 AM
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  SS Featured AuthorTürk BilginiBugbear
Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: {in a leap of faith}
Posts: 31,791
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Sarani Glass
Graduated  x12
|  ♥ Mrs. Itachi Uchiha™ & MAJNOO! : Bleach & Kyo & Natsume ♥ [ Maxh!Jesh ]
SPOILER!!: MyJayMay Quote:
Originally Posted by Jay 
Love the name of the chapter!
The first was 'the beginning' right? Lovely linkage!
 Awesome way to break the kiss!
Bwaha! I love this girl. First she grabs him and kisses him like there's no end, and then she tells him oh so casually to get away.  Awesome!
She so holds her own! I love her fire!
 Mr. Donkey returns!
From loving to awesomely funny.... love how smooth the flow of the story is! Balance of lots of elements!
The Idiot and the Witch. Nice story. 
Bwaha! They can't help their banter even now!
Such intensity of feelings. BEAUTIFUL!
Awww. That was so adorable of him! The good Draco is just as hot as the bad one! I love these two!
BWAHA! Awesomeee!
That was SUCH a beautiful end. I love how you wrap it up and I can just imagine the scene. Too good, Maxo! TOOOOO good.
This was, I have to say, the best ficcie you've ever written. I haven't enjoyed an FF read this much since Ecstasy, and you know that was DA BOMB. I loved this journey! Too many funny moments to recount, and beautiful writing. GREAT ending, too. It's not all happy, and it has its not-so-bright side, but it's totally balanced 'n' realistic.
Gorgeous work!
I will miss this ficcie. 
Love,
~~Jay~~
Thank you for the pretty compliments, bebeh. I'm SHO happy you enjoyed the ficcie. Thank you for being such a good reader.
I will miss this ficcie, too. <3
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