11-04-2009, 02:40 PM
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#137 (permalink)
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| Nogtail
Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: Middle of nowhere
Posts: 4,526
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Cherrinell Baron
First Year  x3
|  JayMay ♥ Big, yellow duckie <3
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“Each look, each collision creates different things.”
I have to say, I luff this quote. It's very true, and I love how you use it so that it has both a figurative and literal meaning. Clever use of words, Maxo!
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“You mean –”
He inclined his head.
I luved this bit! It shows his personality, his style. He's had a rich upbringing hasn't he? You toterly depict that through his actions!
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“You look disturbed, Weasley. Anything the matter?”
 Just look at him! What a question to ask when she's pretty much..... out-of-her-senses with sudden fear! LMAOZ!
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“I know I’m exotically handsome, but I don’t date blood-traitors, Weas –”
 Oh my! He's too awesome! I luv how arrogant he is..... it totally gives him a huge heap of style! Very well-written!
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“You think I’m pretty?”
“SHUT IT.”
Luvvvvvin' the chemistry. 
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Ginny wondered, for a second, if he was amused at her, or at the fact that he had made her blush.
Do I see the hint of ... OTHER things?  Between the lines, you're building up the romance. Clever, Maxo! Very clever. I lyk that!*pets*
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“Only one way to do that, isn’t there? Let’s find some humans – if they exist, and if intelligent apes aren’t what made these buildings.”
 I never thought of that! It really is a very scary prospect! 
But amazin' chapter! I luved how long it was too!
Rock on chicka! You just outdid yourself. <33333333
Love,
~~Jay~~
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Jessica's time on SS is now limited
thanks to that big and BAD thing called
real life
Last edited by Jessica; 11-04-2009 at 02:45 PM.
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