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KellyBear · 10-30-2009, 06:21 AM

While I did spot a couple of grammar errors, I spotted absolutely no plot holes. I think your safe.

I loved the ending.

Just let me Beta it before you close the thread, please.

Sorry I kept getting all your stories confused

It should be easier to keep them straight now though

As I said before, no one writes romance like you

10-30-2009, 06:21 AM	#153 (permalink)
KellyBear Comet aka Fred K/O Fred's Last Laugh Puffskein Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: ♥Lovin' Ottery Posts: 2,252 Hogwarts RPG Name: Nynevah de Wynter	Your Happy Medium Ottery's Editor-In-Chief Resident Heartbreaker While I did spot a couple of grammar errors, I spotted absolutely no plot holes. I think your safe. I loved the ending. Just let me Beta it before you close the thread, please. Sorry I kept getting all your stories confused It should be easier to keep them straight now though As I said before, no one writes romance like you __________________ Your flavour is strawberry. You're a sweet person and a Gryffindor at heart. You see risks and know they are just another part of life. You are loyal and hold your loved ones close, their happiness is your prize. ♥