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Old 10-30-2009, 03:08 AM   #33 (permalink)
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HannahLongbottom: Here's my second comment. I'm going to try and keep up next time, ok? Enough of me babbling about nonsense and on with the story:
Babbling? Who gave you a babbling beverage?

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Ooh! "Araceli" Nice name. No honestly. Ooh! What did her owl bring her? Another question: is Hermia's owl female or male? Just out of curiosity.
She's not Hermia's owl. It means "altar of the sky" from Latin ara "altar" and celi "sky".

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"Artemis" Wow! Another good name. Is Artemis another owl? Wonder what the letter says?
Artemis is Hermia's owl. Her name is possibly related either to Greek αρτεμης (artemes) "safe" or αρταμος (artamos) "a butcher". Artemis was the Greek goddess of the moon and hunting, the twin of Apollo and the daughter of Zeus and Leto. She was known as Diana to the Romans.

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Ooh! "Familiar handwriting". Ok. This is interesting (as ever). OMG! Who is J? I guess i'm going to have to wait and find out since you're not going to tell me, are you?
Of course I'm not going to tell you!

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Haha! Hermia is sneaky! I love the comment in the brackets. That's so funny.
She's very sneaky Remus is a messy boy!

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Ooh! She's "going out with a friend". Ok. Maybe i'm making too much out of a little thing. But still. Ah! Thinking about Ashtad. Ok. Now i need to stop. Moving swiftly on.
Are you sure you're making too much out of it? Have a look at what she's thinking about him though.

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No she doesn't. Ok. Maybe she does but there's a fine line between love and hate.
Oh yes she does, she can't stand him!

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Since they were at school? Wow! They go way back! Ooh! I want to know what happened as well![/b]
Go check the next to last chapter of Bright Lights, there's a mention in there. One that made me laugh.

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Aw! That's so cute! The way they finish each others sentences! Haha! I love the way you said "lazy Marauderish grin". It emphasises on the fact that Teddy is a mini Marauder.
Well, they've been married for a long time at this point. They know each other inside out. Yay! My Mini Marauder!

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Aw! Remus is so adorable! He feels shy! Haha! "strict instructions to sit at the table and relax as he was the guest". I just found that really funny. I guess it's because i say that a lot with guests at my house. I can imagine Teddy and Amelia in the kitchen and telling Ashtad to sit down and relax at the same time.
See, that's just what I'm going for!

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Aw! Remus is so adorable! It can imagine this bit as well.


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You sure about that? Only kidding. I like that trick. Wonder what's in his hand? Hm...
That was a sort of play on Remus' name. bite geddit?

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Aw! That's so cute! Ashtad is so nice! Haha! You've really kept it to Jo's books. "burly even in miniature". I found that funny. I'm guessing Remus is a huge Quidditch fan?
He's one of those little kids that knows all the statistics for the last 20 years and goes on and on and on and on and on about it.

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Wow! Oliver Wood left? He reminds me of Ludo in a way. Oliver not Remus. At least Oliver keeps to his promises. Aw! That's so cute! How Remus likes Oliver and Ashtad () gave him a miniature version of him.
Teddy's 38, which makes Wood 62. That's a bit old to be a pro qudditch player I thought. He's Remus' favourite because he has met him and Wood was nice to him.

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Aw! Poor Amelia! That must be sad on her. Ooh! Wonder what Ashtad is going to make of Hermia all dressed up.
Amelia is a bit bored. Let's see what he thinks, shall we?

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OMG! OMG! OMG! I knew it! Yes! He likes her! I love the way you described his feelings. I could do a dance - the belly dance! Actually i'm not going to - only Omid should do that dance.
Bless him. I just had this image of him sitting there, slack jawed. That dance is just not the same without a pot belly and a microphone

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So the letter was from Jago? Ok. OMG! That must be sad on Ashtad! Just as he was liking her as well. Poor guy.
The letter was from Jago. Ashtad is only noticing her because she is excited to see Jago...

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Aw! Poor guy! That's so sad on him! It's ok, it's ok.
I wouldn't feel too sorry for him.

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Just one thing: And they call it puppy looooove *wonders if that's an actual song*
You are kidding? I know it's from 1972 but I thought everyone knew that song!

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OMG! French! I don't even know what it means and i've been learning it for five years! I think i've got the gist of it but i can't tell you whether or not it's correct. Sorry!
It's supposed to be:
"Are you listening to me Miss Smith?"
"Sorry, Madame La Roux."

But I haven't studied French for oooooh, 14 years? So who knows!

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Wow! That can come in very useful at times. Wish i could do that. Why do they have to learn the spell in French?
She's at Beauxbatons, so she's got to learn in French. Luckily, she speaks French fluently. We just won't get to see her speak it much

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Ooh! Valentin! One sec. One question: did you get the name from the Spanish movie? Talk about being on cloud nine.
No, I haven't seen that one. I just thought it was a good name for a first boyfriend.

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Aw! Poetry and flowers! This guy is so romantic! Now i'm disgusted with myself. He's Parisian? Wow.
A romantic first boyfriend. *sigh* She's a lucky girl. Now I'm disgusted with myself

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OMG! OMG! OMG! Bad Hermia! I thought he was her "friend". I like the sound of the room, though. It sounds elegant. Wonder what Amelia and Teddy are going to say to that? OMG! Ashtad! Poor guy! I feel so sorry for him now. He'll be heartbroken - if he finds out, that is.
He is her friend, she slept alone. She's of age, she's an adult, so Teddy and Amelia have decided that she can make her own mistakes and find her own way out of things. She's a very independent spirit, nothing else would work.

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Woah! First i thought she had a hangover! Glad she didn't. Or did she? Hm...
No, she wasn't drinking, just dancing. Lots of dancing.

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Er..."Beautiful"? Sorry. Moving on.
He almost never calls her Hermia. You'll find out why...

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Ooh! Not good to be late to work! Especially if you're working with Hermione. Tut, tut, tut.
Tut, tut indeed.

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Wow! She is really late. Wonder what method Hermione is going to use to kill her? Only kidding.
Something blunt would be my guess...

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Isit? I never knew that. Still. With Hermione there, you can't be late (at least i don't think so).
I have no idea, I've never had a job in an office before.

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Wow! Turning bossy! I guess she's just angry. Coffee and banana? Caffeine and healthy? If that's what she likes.
Guess what I have for breakfast? It's like rocket fuel!

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Wow! Wonder what's going to happen when she gets into the office? Good luck Hermia (i thin you might need it)!
Oh yes, she will!

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Mines not so good either but i can understand the gist of what you wrote. I can't tell you whether it's right or wrong. Sorry! Great post! Loved it! Can't wait for more!
Kita
Ah well, it's not vital to the plot. There's more for you online, but I'm getting really busy with uni so the next new chapter might take a while. Plus, it's kinda of locked in my head.
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