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That was so sad and yet so sweet! I can't believe it! I felt so sorry for Severus! I love how you used repetition! I loved the ending as well! You've really showed Severus' good side - his side that loves Lily. Great poem! Loved it! Can't wait for more!
Kita
PS: Sorry i didn't reply earlier!
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