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Old 09-02-2004, 02:46 AM   #34 (permalink)
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Aww! Thanks Ryan! lol!

Well, here is a poem that I am working on right now, plz tell me wut u think.


Dripping Pain,
scarred sky,
washing the soul from inside.
Soaked hope,
outweighed sorrows,
brings the heart dismayed for hours.
A living death,
so out of breath,
torn emotions now in wrath.
Portrayed hurt,
betrayed heart.
entombed crys displayed in drops.
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