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Paintbrush 
Whaaaat? Leaving it like this? You caaaan't! 
Brilliant. I love this last part, how you start each section with the same statement and show everyone's POV on it. Wonderfully done. I know, I'm getting good at cliffhangers, considering that I don't like them!
Thanks for the compliment, I really like that technique of showing everyone's POV.
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Lupinfangirlx :O i feel epic really does explain this chapter
i love how you did the diffearnt points of view it really helps understand how each chracter feels at the time, must have been difficult to write from all of their points of view as well
twas briliiant
and i think i shall actually attempt an entry 4 the teddly lupin fanclub thingy as well..hhmmm ...ooohh the fun
Epic, I think that's the word of the week! It was actually really fun to do the POV part
A competitior!!
And the award for the longest comment on the Bright Lights thread goes to... Kita! Quote:
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hermionesclone *wonders what to fling at him* *agrees on the evil git thing* Used teabags? Rotten eggs?
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hermionesclone [COLOR="Magenta"]He makes a lemon sweet. The donkey thing just popped into my head when i read it and i thought i should mention it.
Donkeys are sweet natured creatures really. He's more of a vulture than anything else.
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hermionesclone He is! Well, not horrible but he told me off for laughing too much in his lesson when i did much more laughing the year before and got a really good mark in my exam! Silly guy! Anyways.
Silly man indeed.
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hermionesclone Ugh! He knew how to do the Trip Jinx! Still don't like him!
*gasps* How can he?! Is he not human or something?
Yes he does! Do you know something? Hm...
*gasps* You now something! Well of course - you made up the story! But still...what do you know?
What do I know? Lots about lots. Is he human? Sadly yes he is. Is he powerful? Well, we'll have to see.
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hermionesclone Teddy played more tricks on Smith?! Wow! Go Teddy!
Of course he did, he's a mini-marauder!
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hermionesclone Haha! Yeah, you do. Is this person named after a bully, enemy or horrible teacher? Hehe! I was watching a couple of shows of Omid Djalili on Youtube whilst i was having pasta! His name will be explained. As will someone else's
I'm a bit surprised that you haven't questioned me calling him John Smith, I've borrowed that from somewhere
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hermionesclone [COLOR="Magenta"]*pours coffee in a flask and sends it via owl post* There you go. Thank you!
Cheers! I may need some more soon.
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hermionesclone Ooh! What do you mean you're not happy with the ending?! I'm sure it's perfectly fine! Well, more than fine, since it concerns your story! Ooh! We get to vote! Or do we? Hm...
I did some work on it and I'm happier than I was. I had three possibilities and now I'm down to two possiblilites. You're not going to get a vote though sorry, I changed my mind.
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hermionesclone Aw! Poor Cosmo! *hugs him* Aw! He thinks they're covered in ketchup! Aw! *sniffs; then starts crying* Poor family!
Noo! What are you doing?! What's wrong with you?! Are you even human?! Stop treating Remus like that! Ah! That's so sad! Cosmo had to watch while Remus gets tortured! *cries even more*
Starts crying? Yikes!
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hermionesclone Aw! Poor Caitlin! That's so sad! She also had to watch while Remus got tortured! Well sort of. Wow! The pink light came! Is Amelia awake?! Wow! Hope she is! Hope she's ok! *crosses fingers and cries even more* OMG! What happened to Remus?! Why you evil gits! *takes out wand and stands in front of Remus* Yes! She's awake! Hope she's ok! *tries to cross fingers and realise that they are already crossed* Bless her she's a bit more aware than Cosmo, a bit more grown up. Is Amelia ok? No Comment.
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hermionesclone Yes! Teddy forced the poles out of the seat! Yes! Go Teddy! Hope he manages to hex Smith (i'm still going to call him that) with something so good, he ends up in the Hospital Wing for eternity and beyond! *crosses toes for extra measure*
This is Smith we're talking about. The first thing he did was take Teddy and Amelia's wands.
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hermionesclone Aw! Cute, cute, cute, cute, cute! That was just really, really cute! Especially Remus saying that he'll never let Tonks fall. I couldn't help crying even more. Haha! Tonks' last comment was so funny!
Thanks! This was an extra I wrote due to the 'epic split'. I thought we needed something lovely, considering what's coming up...
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hermionesclone :faints: OMG! OMG! OMG! What did he just say he's going to do? That silly, silly man! Right. That's it. *points wand at this person*
Silly? More evil than silly surely? He means it.
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hermionesclone Ah! No! What do you think they're doing?! Stop torturing Remus, you evil gits! Wow! The blue orb! Hope he's ok!
I want to tell you, I really do, but the spoiler police will come and get me!
I hope you're sharing that chocolate? Or is that too much to ask? The next bit is the end of chapter eight and then there's the epilouge, which is the end! Sorry
But I'm planning a story for Hermia, called Tempestuous. Keep an eye out for it.
Have a go at the comp Kita! I'm sure you'll be great!