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My KellyBear 
"Shut up, you old bat, and help me find the little fiends who set it off." snapped Alecto.
Professor McGonagall's nostrils flared as she glared at Alecto's back. "Shut. It. Off. Now."
Alecto opened her mouth to retort, but snapped it shut instantly. Severus Snape was gliding toward them, his face a mask of cold fury.
"Silence it now."
Yeah, Alecto sux. Stupid charm waking up the whole school
And calling Professor McGonagall a
when she's so clearly a
Neways, the Carrow's are meanies even if they are loyal to each other and not complete and utter morons ...
of course the students did it.
It's called guerilla warfare ...
Go Neville and poor sleepy Seamus
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Kelly I love Snape Bear "Likely your idiot brother poisoned himself," Alecto bristled at Professor Snape's words, but held her tongue.
:simm: You have to love the Snape he's evil even when he's being one of the good guys
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KellyBear who is not a hare
Wearing a look that suggested she had just eaten a dozen doxie eggs, Professor McGonagall addressed herself to Professor Snape. "Headmaster, what about the charms on the entrances to the four Houses?"
I like the Doxie eggs description
nice touch of HPism if you will.
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Kelly I'm part Irish Bear
Once inside the Gryffindor Common Room, Neville tapped Seamus once on the head, removing the Disillusionment Charm.
"That was a fair bit of magic, mate, but did you have to hit me quite so hard?" asked Seamus, rubbing his still aching head.
Poor Seamus where's Dean to make it better?
Neville's too rough. Neways, I thought that was a cute touch and it's cool to see Neville is good at magic even under pressure. Yup yup.
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Kelly who loves Neville and Dark Chocolate Bear Hannah nodded and a playful breeze lifted a strand of her blonde hair, whipping it across her face. Without thinking, Neville pushed the errant strand back behind her ear with a finger, marveling for a moment at the way it caught the sun. Suddenly embarrassed and flustered by his own boldness and familiarity, Neville snatched his hand away, blushing a violent shade of red. Before he looked away, he saw the wondering look Hannah gave him, as though seeing him for the first time.
2 qut = too cute. Seriously, adorableness. I think you should have stopped at that and left the kiss for later on in the story but ... you know me. I make these stories into long long things that just never seem to end
so ... cute and kewl.
Neville and Hannah sitting in a tree ...
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Kelly Otty's Gummi Bear [COLOR="Navy"]"I..I think that is a wonderful idea, " she said breathlessly, "this weekend then." Impulsively, she stood on tiptoe and kissed his cheek.
Seriously adorable. A bit premeditated IMHO but good just the same. Very adorable.
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Kelly my sweet pookie Bear What on earth had just happened? He touched the place on his cheek where she had kissed him. They had come outside to discuss sabotage, and instead she had kissed him.
Hannah had kissed him! Still touching the place on his cheek, he whistled a merry tune as he made his way toward his next class.
To the first part ... OMG!
Neville goes out to plot sabotage and gets a kiss ... I loved that line btw. I wish I had thought of it first. I'm jealous LOL You write beautifully. I love your romances ... Ginny's longing and now Neville finding his heart and Hannah being flirty too cute ... seriously, give us more ... but I guess I should keep reading to find out, no?
I can't believe Neville whistles
I'm jealous I can't ... keep up the good work Kellybear. I love your fic. I'll be caught up soon enough ... I hope.