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ginny37 
Bravo!!
Thanks!
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Lupinfangirlx OMG DUN DUNN DUNN!
major cliff hanger, and ooohhh .. daddy :O NO WAY!!??
yes way!
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Lupinfangirlx i loved the flashbacks and i laughed soo much at sum of the them
, hold on i'll quote
i know that was a little evil (o.k very evil
but loved it so yay)
that made me laugh so much, and i couldn't help but think of shrek, oooh loved it
Also, how you included Neville as a teacher was good, but :O fighting like that at hogwarts! tut tut tut
but poor Teddy bleeding like that
but cliff hanger!!
I'm glad that you laughed!
I love writing flashbacks that include cannon characters. Did you work out who the Potions Proffessor is? (Clue, a ravenclaw DA member).
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Lupinfangirlx ooohh and i wouldn't use the scary zappy laptop either
well now i so wanna know wat happens next!!
excited much
can't wait, and that was a huge chapter
and i 4got the letter thingy i made up.. :S *scrols back up* hhmm not on this page kk a new one is neccesary
LTCAEFTN- Loved This Chapter And Excited For The Next
much love, great chpater
i love this story!
LTCAEFTN! the next chapter is HUGE! I can't find a place to split it into two smaller chapters. Glad you liked it, you might have to wait a bit longer for the next one, sorry!
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norenchen I'm speechless!! that was the best chapter yet
"Daddy?" brought a tear to my eye
PAMS
Shell
Thanks Shell, that's really lovely! *passes Shell a box of tissues for the next chapter*
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hermionesclone Woah! Talk about a meanie! Can i fling a remark at him? *takes out wand and prepares for a fight*
You can fling whatever you like at him my lovely, he's an evil git.
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hermionesclone Haha! I want to transfigure him into something! Hmm... Hard. Lemon or pig? Maybe a donkey? Donkey!
I thought lemon 'cos he's clearly bitter about something!
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hermionesclone Ooh! Cute robes! I like the sound of them! Reminds me of Dumbledore for some reason! Good choice Teddy!
Well he's a colourful person, I couldn't have him in dull robes
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hermionesclone I don't like the way he's smirking! There's something wrong! *stalks them*
Watch out Smith, Kita's onto you!
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hermionesclone Does he really like being mean or something?! I think there's something wrong with him! Teddy's a nice person, you know! No-one irritates me quite so much as this guy (apart from my maths teacher 
). Go Teddy! That line was funny! *thinks about transfiguring him into a pumpkin* Wow, your maths teacher must be horrible!
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hermionesclone Ok. Now there's something wrong! Wow! I bet it was Smith! I bet he had a hand in it.
*gasps* I knew it! Evil little bugger! I can't believe he used a Trip Jinx! Honestly! Silly little boy! I can't believe he didn't even get into trouble! That's so sad on poor Teddy!
Proffessor Boot has underestimated Smith, he thinks that Smith wouldn't be able to perform a Trip Jinx at the age of 12.
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hermionesclone OMG! That guy is seriously evil! You can't take a girl Teddy likes like that! I bet he doesn't even like her! Smith i mean. I bet he's only doing that to get at Teddy! That's so sad! Poor Teddy! It's ok Teddy, it's ok!
Is it? Hmmmm
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hermionesclone Why would you do that?! Teddy is just as good as his parents! And his parents were good people! Very good people! You can't insult them like that, Smith! *glares at him*
Watch out Smith, she's coming to get you!
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hermionesclone Haha! That was so funny! Go Teddy for coming up with such a good plan! Well done! Ha! How does he like that? I'm so glad he got a telling off! Those rumors were nasty! How dare he?! I'm glad Teddy got his own back! I doubt that was the only trick that Teddy played on Smith.
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hermionesclone Yeah! What have you done to her, Smith?! If we find out you've done something to her...*stands next to Teddy to fight* Be prepared!
He was fairly horrible to her, let's put it that way.
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hermionesclone Woah! Fight, fight, fight! *joins in to help Teddy* Wow! Is Smith really good at duelling or something? Don't hurt Teddy like that! You meanie! Wow! Go Neville for controlling things! Well done! Wow! So many injuries! Tut, tut, tut!
Well, Smith does seem to be very powerful, doesn't he?
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hermionesclone What?! What happened to her?! Right. Who did this?! Wonder who that man is? So many questions. *sighs* Hope Amelia is ok!
What?! What on earth happened?! They took Teddy as well?! Why?! I think i know who it is. But if it's who i think it is, then woah! Can't believe they both got attacked! I want to know why! Hope they're ok! *crosses fingers*
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hermionesclone OMG! OMG! OMG! I knew it! This guy is a double agent! Good on Harry to warn Teddy - sort of! I bet he doesn't have a care in the world! Silly boy! Now i seriously hate him!
We all hate him!
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hermionesclone Alberich? I bet you got that from somewhere didn't you? Can't believe his real name is Alberich! Wow! Has he been having a different identity all this time? From when he was small?
You know I love naming my Bad Guys! All my names are researched (apart from Amelia and Keith who were named by Lupinfangirlx and Paintbrush).
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hermionesclone 
OMG! OMG! OMG! He's Hermia's dad?! Since when?! Why wasn't he there for her?! OMG! I just realised Morgana (was that her name?)! She was Hermia's mother! And now Hermia's got a really evil father! Poor Hermia! That's so sad! Wow! She's got a birthmark on her stomach! Wow! Hermia knew her dad's name, but not who he was. He wasn't there for her because... I can't tell you. Poor Hermia indeed. Thankfully she's got Teddy and Amelia
She's got a birth mark on her stomach because I have and I was running out of imagination
You can't be too enthusiastic! Pass me some coffee though, I've got lots of typing to do.
I'm glad you like the story, I like your comments
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princess of*hp* Ahhhhhhhhhhh!
Cliffhangers, no! Then again, I leave some pretty gnarly ones myself.
Anyways, loved it like always. Especially the Hogwarts flashbacks.
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Thanks but you can't tell me off for Cliffies! Yours are far more nail biting than mine!
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potionsmaster22 Ahhhh no cliffies!! great chapter! post more soon!! PAMS
*Sammy*
Thanks Sammy but you might have to wait a little while longer.
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Ginny Molly Weasley New reader!
PAMS!
A new reader! Welcome Welcome!
Well folks, I've written the next chapter out long hand but I'm not happy with the end. You may end up voting on what kind of end you want!