ok here it is the detail and meaningfull outline and wonderfull use of english rules and other stuff <span style='color:green'>(sorry I just can't spell right now) <span style='color:purple'>give it an almost slick pristine form. Keep it up cause you are wonderfull at rwrighting poetry. I will keep checking back here you seem to have a nack at wonderful poetry wrighting plus I like your structure but don't be afraid to srtay from that.</span></span> :flowersmile: :flowersmile: :flowersmile: :flowersmile: :flowersmile: