OMG DUN DUNN DUNN!
major cliff hanger, and ooohhh .. daddy :O NO WAY!!??
i loved the flashbacks and i laughed soo much at sum of the them
, hold on i'll quote
Quote:
“Perhaps they have more subtlety than you?”
i know that was a little evil (o.k very evil
but loved it so yay)
Quote:
Teddy looked up furiously, pointing sausage sized fingers at Smith.
“It was him! He threatened me! He tripped me!”
that made me laugh so much, and i couldn't help but think of shrek, oooh loved it
Also, how you included Neville as a teacher was good, but :O fighting like that at hogwarts! tut tut tut
but poor Teddy bleeding like that
but cliff hanger!! ooohh and i wouldn't use the scary zappy laptop either
well now i so wanna know wat happens next!!
excited much
can't wait, and that was a huge chapter
and i 4got the letter thingy i made up.. :S *scrols back up* hhmm not on this page kk a new one is neccesary
LTCAEFTN- Loved This Chapter And Excited For The Next
much love, great chpater
i love this story!