Okay I got to Chapter Six, part four, Grey, and all I can say is WOW! I seriously love what you have going for this FF. Angsty Teddy is verrrrry cute (in a way XD). Sad that he is angsty, but the writing is beautiful.
Quote:
“I think I do Remus. You’ve become so icy with her I’m surprised that the poor girl hasn’t got frostbite. She’s the best thing that could happen to you, but she wants more than a fling and you can’t handle it. You’re really pathetic.”
There was a loud bang and Sirius was blasted off his feet. He hit the dresser
with a sickening crunch of ribs.
“Don’t talk about things you don’t understand Sirius. You may have stopped at sixteen, but the rest of us kept growing.”
“Oh mother of Merlin, you love her.”
That had to be one of my favorite parts. I love Sirius! And you made him sound soooo good. I see him saying something like that to Remus. That was brilliant.
Also, thank you for all the shout outs, and dedications. It makes me feel special.
I will read more when I can! But now I need some sleep.
-Steph