Where ever to begin? 
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Originally Posted by The Great & Powerful Maxie
In their third year, they learned of Voldemort, a young dark wizard who was gaining more and more power by the day, a young dark wizard who had already gathered armies and who was now indestructible.
In their third year, they learned of Voldemort, a young dark wizard who had once been, like them, a student who was admired by those that taught him, looked up to by those he hung out with.
In their third year, they learned of Voldemort, and that he had been barely fourteen when he had killed their parents when they caught him breaking into their house.
That was very poetical Maxie, do you read poetry? It sounded very lyrical I liked it a lot, musical in a way too. As if you're trying to pound the sound of something important, that in their third year they learned about Voldemort. I thought you did it rather well, I like that ...
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Originally Posted by Poetical Maxie
From then on, their paths separated.
- As one of the twins began to hate the Dark Arts, the other’s fascination with it began.
That was both poetic and dramatic
I love it, and I love the twins. I can't believe I missed so much of your postings ...
Sorry about that but you seemed to have been on a posting frenzy lately and I really can't say I'm complaining I love this story ...
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Originally Posted by I don't call anyone by their titles Maxie
She was one of the few people who refused to add the word "Countess" before Alva's name, and was proud of herself for it.
Childish of Narcissa and it goes to show her lack of sophistication and naivete, which of course foreshadows what's about to happen ...
She should have listened to Bellatrix.
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Originally Posted by Should have listened to Bellatrix Maxie
Andra had planned all this, Narcissa was sure, to humiliate this. If only she had listened to Bellatrix –
Told ya.
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Originally Posted by I'm so not a Death Eater Maxie
For, on her sixteenth birthday, Jenna White had become a death eater.
Traitorous witch, the man killed her parents ... I don't believe I like her anymore, though I do hope her twin comes out more in the story ... it's interesting how they're on opposite ends of the ... but I'm sure that's not coincidental
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You really are talented Maxie. I love how poetical and lyrical your story is, I love how with a few simple deft strokes, words, keystrokes whatever you can create such a vivid picture ... it never feels over burdened or heavy, just right. Nice work Max, keep it up ... and sorry I was late love I'm always late to the party