09-06-2009, 07:04 PM
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| Pogrebin
Join Date: May 2009 Location: London
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Hogwarts RPG Name:
Alexander River Hirsch
Gryffindor Third Year
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OMG! Bad Kita! Missed Xavier's poems again! Anyways. Here's my comment for all your poems i've missed:
You walk the halls: Haha!  That was hilarious! I was laughing so much! You've portrayed how the students felt when Umbridge was there well!
You can't hear no-one: That was so sad! I felt so sorry for Harry! It reminded me of the time in Ootp after Sirius died. That was really good!
You say i can't have you: Aw! That was so sad! And sweet! I felt so sorry for Tonks! I like the hair comment - how it'll turn black! You've done a good job in showing the love between Tonks and Remus and the furry problem getting in the way!
The air is dim: Aw! You've portrayed the whole Hermione-Ron-Lavender thing really well! I feel so sad for Hermione! And Ron's a bit silly!
Tighting: Aw! That was so cute! I loved the way you made it sound dangerous and then you ended it so sweetly! I loved the ending! It was really cute!
Suffer in silence: Wow! For the first time, i feel sorry for Luna! Ok, i felt sorry for her before but i've never felt as sorry for her as i felt when i read your poem! That was so sad! Poor Luna! She puts on a brave face! *sniffs*
Great poems Xavier! They really made my day! Loved them! Can't wait for more!
Kita
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