
Well, so long as you don't kill yourself or Ron, I'm happy

*looks up fatalist*

I'm the opposite...You're the only force guiding your future
*pets* :hack:s writer's block

The best advice I can give you is to write a paragraph of nonsense and see where it takes you

Or alternatively, write what you're absolutely sure about and work backwards until you meet up with the last post
Now for critiques....I've got none

Like Connie up there ^ (

) I think you've got everything perfect. I would love to know more about the smaller original characters, though. Like Angel and that girl and Sebastien too