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Jessica · 08-26-2009, 11:41 AM

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Originally Posted by Maxo

Passion.

I luv the start.

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Long ago, passion was suffering.

My suffering.

You just gave me shivers. -shivers-

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As desire, passion consumes.
– As suffering, it kills continuously.

Oh my. =[

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The last thing I saw was Lily’s eyes.

This was.......... just too beautiful! I luved it, I love how you wrote Severus, I love how we don't know how the story is about, at the beginning. It was so short, but it conveyed everything so realistically. So beautifully.

PAMS!

~~Jay~~

08-26-2009, 11:41 AM	#29 (permalink)
Jessica Nogtail Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: Middle of nowhere Posts: 4,526 Hogwarts RPG Name: Cherrinell Baron First Year x3	JayMay ♥ Big, yellow duckie <3 Quote: Originally Posted by Maxo Passion. I luv the start. Quote: Long ago, passion was suffering. My suffering. You just gave me shivers. -shivers- Quote: As desire, passion consumes. – As suffering, it kills continuously. Oh my. =[ Quote: The last thing I saw was Lily’s eyes. This was.......... just too beautiful! I luved it, I love how you wrote Severus, I love how we don't know how the story is about, at the beginning. It was so short, but it conveyed everything so realistically. So beautifully. PAMS! ~~Jay~~ __________________ Jessica's time on SS is now limited thanks to that big and BAD thing called real life