no i love everyones opinion here's my new poem hope you like
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If only He knew
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his talking to me, just talking*
i look at his messy black hair and *
gorgous vivid green eyes*
his beautiful face.*
if only he knew....*
then cho came*
with her her wonderful delicate face*
and silky black hair*
she grabbed harry's hand*
and pulled him away*
he smiled and gave a small wave*
once he turned away my smile faded*
if only he knew *
i wish he knew*
how much i realy loved him.*
then maybe i'd be the one to*
hold hands with him *
and pull him away.*
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i'm writing this from ginny's point of you with a,little bit of what i'm going through hope you guys enjoyed it tell me what you think i also take suggestions so i can do better next time