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firenjen · 08-24-2009, 08:43 PM

made by me

Hi im Jen! This is my first go in the poetry Vault so tell me what you think!

I also have two Fan Fics, so feel free to check them out if you have time or if oyu wanna. They're both in the romance section and they anre called Echos and Troubled.

Disclaimer: i dont own any of the Harry Potter Universe, it belongs to Miss J K Rowling

This first poem is about the idea of what lurks behind the curtain that Sirius fell though. I hope you like it.

so here goes:

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Through the Curtain

Through the curtain,
Where nothing belongs
where smoke swirls and swishes
Singing ghostly lit songs

They’re greedy, they’re wanting
They’re long lives are watered
They wait for the innocent
And prey on the tortured

But you must be strong,
And keep your mind set
It keeps me awake and I scream and I shout
And I wake in the night when I’m covered in sweat

From the torture I know that they’re putting you through
But you have to be strong
It’s all down to you

You fell though the curtain and into their trap
I still want to blame you
For crossing the gap

But even in death I see your eyes,
Sparkling and shining and happy with pride
But you fell though the curtain...
And threw me aside..

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Let me know what you think

08-24-2009, 08:43 PM	#1 (permalink)
firenjen SS100 Triumphant Mooncalf Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: Yonder ♥ Posts: 7,769 Hogwarts RPG Name: Carve Hetcher Fifth Year	Distract Me, Please - Sa13+ so you can convince yourself that im cute made by me Hi im Jen! This is my first go in the poetry Vault so tell me what you think! I also have two Fan Fics, so feel free to check them out if you have time or if oyu wanna. They're both in the romance section and they anre called Echos and Troubled. Disclaimer: i dont own any of the Harry Potter Universe, it belongs to Miss J K Rowling This first poem is about the idea of what lurks behind the curtain that Sirius fell though. I hope you like it. so here goes: ************************************************ ********************************** Through the Curtain Through the curtain, Where nothing belongs where smoke swirls and swishes Singing ghostly lit songs They’re greedy, they’re wanting They’re long lives are watered They wait for the innocent And prey on the tortured But you must be strong, And keep your mind set It keeps me awake and I scream and I shout And I wake in the night when I’m covered in sweat From the torture I know that they’re putting you through But you have to be strong It’s all down to you You fell though the curtain and into their trap I still want to blame you For crossing the gap But even in death I see your eyes, Sparkling and shining and happy with pride But you fell though the curtain... And threw me aside.. ************************************************ *************************** Let me know what you think Last edited by Droo; 12-23-2009 at 03:18 PM.