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Rania 
Hurrah, hurrah! I'm so glad you liked them, Maxie. And no, I haven't tried an agent. Doesn't something like that require money? If so, lack there of.
-random hug-
Try a reputed publisher, luff. Good publishers NEVER ask for money. Rather, they pay you in advance, and then you get royalties, and stuff. Quote:
Originally Posted by
Rania Grace your presence on me as
starlight softly tip-toes.
You have such beautiful starts. -in love-
Starlight on tiptoe.... Such a truly lovely comparison. Quote:
while waning reality to fine dust.
Fine dust = lovely metaphor for the loss of "reality." <3 Quote:
Follow me behind the secret stairways.
Lovely. VERY lovely.
Secret stairways = Awesome'eth. Quote:
He collects in calm brown eyes
memories within the moon
Adore these lines. "Memories within the moon" - very nice touch. <3 Quote:
by sending the forbidden kiss.
Forbidden kiss.... Wow. Great adjectival use. It makes everything seem so much more romantic. Yes, I can be such hopeless romantic, sometimes.
One word: MORE! 