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Rania 
Perhaps you can give me some tips on how to get published. I know I have great material. I just don't know what to do with it. =] Thanks a billion.
Have you tried an agent, luff? 
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Originally Posted by
Rania the strict bars of life bound us
to bid certain bygones.
Beautifully said. <3 Quote:
the life I've led in sorrow
I pass down to Potter.
VERY nice ending, I love the flow of the whole thing. Job well done! Quote:
Originally Posted by
Rania Let the seasons segue,
I'm ready for a quite cold change.
This is.... really romantic. I don't know why I took to it that way, but it's so imaginative. I adore this bit! Quote:
into a dimension of longing.
"Dimension of longing" - Lovely wording. <3
* * * Good job, good job. Can't wait for more!
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