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Maxilocks · 08-20-2009, 02:45 AM

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Originally Posted by Rania

Eh. Line two is supposed to be repetitive. I LIKED that it interrupted the flow, heehee. It's just my style.

Awww, okay hun. I didn't mean to be rude or anything. I'm a published poetess myself, and I actually really enjoy your poetry. <3

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Originally Posted by Rania

From Tonks. To Remus.
Part Deux

Duex. I love that word.

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completely rearrange in your mind
your constant constellations?

VERY beautiful. My favourite bit in the whole poem.

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I have, in fact, grown quite attached
to the very man you know.

Nice work, another good finish.

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Maxilocks SS Featured Author Türk Bilgini Bugbear Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: {in a leap of faith} Posts: 31,791 Hogwarts RPG Name: Sarani Glass Graduated x12	♥ Mrs. Itachi Uchiha™ & MAJNOO! : Bleach & Kyo & Natsume ♥ [ Maxh!Jesh ] Quote: Originally Posted by Rania Eh. Line two is supposed to be repetitive. I LIKED that it interrupted the flow, heehee. It's just my style. Awww, okay hun. I didn't mean to be rude or anything. I'm a published poetess myself, and I actually really enjoy your poetry. <3 Quote: Originally Posted by Rania From Tonks. To Remus. Part Deux Duex. I love that word. Quote: completely rearrange in your mind your constant constellations? VERY beautiful. My favourite bit in the whole poem. Quote: I have, in fact, grown quite attached to the very man you know. Nice work, another good finish.