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Old 08-17-2009, 03:58 PM   #68 (permalink)
Amerleigh
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Erika May Miller
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“Blood traitor’s brat! Be gone from my house! Shame of flesh, get out of my -”

“Oh shut up you stupid old cow!” A young voice that Remus didn’t recognise was giving as good as it got.

“Foul abomination!”

“Oh, look who’s talking you old banshee!”

Remus chuckled. He stood up and went to the balustrade, leaning over to see who was trading insults with the formidable Mrs Black.




I laughed so much at that!
Hey! I'm not a new reader but I've not commented on your FanFic before, so I guess I'm a new commenter?

Anyway, this FanFic is really good. Like, stupidly good =)
Your style of writing is unique, in the way that you flick between the present and the past, but it's a good type of unique (Y)
Excellent storyline, and I'm so glad that Teddy and Amelia got married!

Please add more when you can
-Amy xx
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