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hermionesclone · 08-10-2009, 07:12 PM

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Originally Posted by HannahLongbottom

You cried? Oh I'm sorry! I wanted to tug at some heartstrings but I didn't mean to make anyone cry

Blame it on The English Patient, all that angst!

I'm glad you both liked the flashback, I had to rewrite it a few times before I was happy with it. I was worried about having Remus attack Sirius, but I thnk it works

Hey, don't worry about it! I was crying about something else from before so i was already emotional. And anyways, it shows that your writing is really good! The Remus attacking Sirius part really does work! It shows that Remus likes Tonks as well but doesn't want to admit it for some reason. Well, sort of.

08-10-2009, 07:12 PM	#60 (permalink)
hermionesclone Gladrags Mod DMC & DMAC Pogrebin Join Date: May 2009 Location: London Posts: 32,844 Hogwarts RPG Name: Alexander River Hirsch Gryffindor Third Year Hogwarts RPG Name: -- x11 x11	urine trouble \| Pat's Strong Confident Other Half \| Pees Like a Champion Unicorn Racehorse Quote: Originally Posted by HannahLongbottom You cried? Oh I'm sorry! I wanted to tug at some heartstrings but I didn't mean to make anyone cry Blame it on The English Patient, all that angst! I'm glad you both liked the flashback, I had to rewrite it a few times before I was happy with it. I was worried about having Remus attack Sirius, but I thnk it works Hey, don't worry about it! I was crying about something else from before so i was already emotional. And anyways, it shows that your writing is really good! The Remus attacking Sirius part really does work! It shows that Remus likes Tonks as well but doesn't want to admit it for some reason. Well, sort of. __________________