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##Hermione&Draco## · 08-10-2009, 04:05 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Hermione<3Ron

WOAH!!!!!!!
Xavierluff that was brilliantamazingfantasticawesomeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!! xDDD
I cried during part of it but the end made me feel so fuzzy and warm inside. xD

Jess

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Hehehehehe..
I loved the Ending of it...
It made me fuzzy inside too......
I hope you like this next one....
-Xavier-
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Quote:

Originally Posted by SenoritaMaxie

Finally back after my trip!

Enjoyed reading through the thread, great new poetry.
More soon, mmkay? You do a great job. =]

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YAY!!!!
Your back..
**I cling on to you..**
Dont worry the New poem is coming...
-Xavier-
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Quote:

Originally Posted by hermionesclone

Nine tears made me cry so much! It was so sad! The first 8 tears were. The last one was so cute that i cried even more. Only because i was happy and everything turned out all right. I can't believe it. It's so good! Great post! Loved it! Can't wait for more!

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Ya I like the Last tear the Most....
I was sooo happy...
(Eventhough I made the Poem)
And thank you...
And New Poem will be up...
-Xaveir-
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Quote:

Originally Posted by SenoritaMaxie

-pokes t3h Xavier-
I want a new poemmm!

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Fine...
Just for you ill post a poem straight away....
Gosh man!!! jkjkjkjk lol
I hope you like it...
Here are some flowers to make up for the Times I havent posted a poem in a while.....
-Xavier-
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#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#**#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#*# *#*
Hello Guys
Ok....
You know How I still Had to write the 3 Wars to the Previous war with the Muggles....
Well they are done....
But..Here is the Deal...
Im leaving them As cliffhangers.....
For the Mean time...
I will be posting Regular HP Poems....
So here is a new Hp Poem...
That is not one of the Long ones....
Thanks to Maxie..**Cough** **FORCED ME** **Cough**
#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#*##*#*#*#*#*#*#*#*# *#*#
Lie To Me
I laid curled up...
wrapped in your arms that Night....
The world Surrounding us...
Within it...
Terror was everywhere......
I didnt want to worry myself....
Hopefull that I will stay calm...
And Believe that everything...
Everyone...
Will be alright....
As I lay here...
As I saw it.....
Protected...
In the Arms of Ronald.....
We stared at the World...
Glistening with Fire...
And Bodies laying...
Everywhere...
I looked up at Ron....
My voice calm....
and I said....
"Lie to Me..."
He stared at me.....
and he said...,
"Everything will be fine..."
Then We turned...
A bang out in the Distance.....
People screaming....
DeathEaters looming....
Killing everyone...
And everywhere.....
A deathEater pointed his wand toward a house.....
It blew up...
As bright orange shot off...
From The DeathEaters wand....
Not caring if they Died or not...
Tears fled from my eyes...
They dripped onto the Ground...
Where I laid helpless in Ron's arms....
I then say....,
"Lie to me...."
Your voice was worried and scared....
"No one is going to hurt you..."
The I saw an image....
Like a dream.....
I was fighting 2 DeathEaters at the same time....
I was sweating....
I could see that I was in Trouble....
I was losing....
I was weak.....
Then the DeathEaters pointed his Wand at me...
And the DeathEater said....,
"STUPEFY!!!"
Red light was shot from the tip of the wand....
The spell moving slowly.....
I reached for my wand....
But my arm was moving slowly....
But It was too late...
And The Blazing...
Firery Spell...
Hit me.........
Square in the Chest...
I was weak....
I fell on a hard Large Rock...
Then I saw Red Substance trickling from...
And down my mouth.....
Then It went black...
I was back to where I was....
I still laid upon in Rons Arms...
I thought About what happened in my dream...
Then I turned to Ron again.....
And I said," Lie to me..."
Then you said...,
"Im not going anywhere..."
I thought about that....
About that Lie....
I was then Dreaming that We were
Together....
We were in love.....
You kissed upon me.....
We broke apart.....
I looked Into your eyes....
But your eyes were Focused somewhere else....
The I turned...
Out Of Nowhere...
Lavendar was there...
and She said,"Come On Won-Won....."
The Ron let go Of me...
And Left me stranded....
Alone.....
After what I thought I was back to Reality...
Me and Ron Still Inclosed Together...
Looking at the World.....
Then I said...,
"Tell me the Truth...
Do you love me.....???"
He looked Into My eyes......
"Yes...I do..."
We had happy years together after...
Me and Ron Got married.....
Then A day came....
I was crying...
Looking at you....
I said..,"Dont Die.....
Lie to me.."
And you were weak.....
But you spoke these words....
that Came out of Your mouth...,
"Im not going to die...."
But then....
You died....
It was a fact.....
You left.....
I was all alone....
Without you Ron....
Im nothing...
I loved you...
and I will not stop Loving you....
Until The Day Ill draw My last Breath....
When Im dead...
When Im no more....
I wont stop loving you...
And that is not a lie...
#*##*#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#*# *#*
I really didnt like it...
But Yall might've...
Anyways I will post another poem soon...
-Xavier-
AND GUYS CHECK OUT JESS&MARCYS FABTABULOUS SHOP OF GRAPHICS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ITS AWESOME......
THEY MADE MY AWESOME AVATAR!!!

08-10-2009, 04:05 PM	#90 (permalink)
##Hermione&Draco## Puffskein Join Date: Jun 2009 Location: United States- TX Posts: 1,393 Hogwarts RPG Name: Mauricio Lucien Xanders Sixth Year	##Life Sucks,Then You Die.##- I am Misunderstood,Vulnerable,and In Love<3 Quote: Originally Posted by Hermione<3Ron WOAH!!!!!!! Xavierluff that was brilliantamazingfantasticawesomeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!! xDDD I cried during part of it but the end made me feel so fuzzy and warm inside. xD Jess ================================================== ==== Hehehehehe.. I loved the Ending of it... It made me fuzzy inside too...... I hope you like this next one.... -Xavier- ================================================== ==== Quote: Originally Posted by SenoritaMaxie Finally back after my trip! Enjoyed reading through the thread, great new poetry. More soon, mmkay? You do a great job. =] ================================================== === YAY!!!! Your back.. I cling on to you.. Dont worry the New poem is coming... -Xavier- ================================================== === Quote: Originally Posted by hermionesclone Nine tears made me cry so much! It was so sad! The first 8 tears were. The last one was so cute that i cried even more. Only because i was happy and everything turned out all right. I can't believe it. It's so good! Great post! Loved it! Can't wait for more! ================================================== == Ya I like the Last tear the Most.... I was sooo happy... (Eventhough I made the Poem) And thank you... And New Poem will be up... -Xaveir- ================================================== == Quote: Originally Posted by SenoritaMaxie -pokes t3h Xavier- I want a new poemmm! ================================================== = Fine... Just for you ill post a poem straight away.... Gosh man!!! jkjkjkjk lol I hope you like it... Here are some flowers to make up for the Times I havent posted a poem in a while..... -Xavier- ================================================== = #############*############ # Hello Guys Ok.... You know How I still Had to write the 3 Wars to the Previous war with the Muggles.... Well they are done.... But..Here is the Deal... Im leaving them As cliffhangers..... For the Mean time... I will be posting Regular HP Poems.... So here is a new Hp Poem... That is not one of the Long ones.... Thanks to Maxie..Cough FORCED ME Cough ########################## ## Lie To Me I laid curled up... wrapped in your arms that Night.... The world Surrounding us... Within it... Terror was everywhere...... I didnt want to worry myself.... Hopefull that I will stay calm... And Believe that everything... Everyone... Will be alright.... As I lay here... As I saw it..... Protected... In the Arms of Ronald..... We stared at the World... Glistening with Fire... And Bodies laying... Everywhere... I looked up at Ron.... My voice calm.... and I said.... "Lie to Me..." He stared at me..... and he said..., "Everything will be fine..." Then We turned... A bang out in the Distance..... People screaming.... DeathEaters looming.... Killing everyone... And everywhere..... A deathEater pointed his wand toward a house..... It blew up... As bright orange shot off... From The DeathEaters wand.... Not caring if they Died or not... Tears fled from my eyes... They dripped onto the Ground... Where I laid helpless in Ron's arms.... I then say...., "Lie to me...." Your voice was worried and scared.... "No one is going to hurt you..." The I saw an image.... Like a dream..... I was fighting 2 DeathEaters at the same time.... I was sweating.... I could see that I was in Trouble.... I was losing.... I was weak..... Then the DeathEaters pointed his Wand at me... And the DeathEater said...., "STUPEFY!!!" Red light was shot from the tip of the wand.... The spell moving slowly..... I reached for my wand.... But my arm was moving slowly.... But It was too late... And The Blazing... Firery Spell... Hit me......... Square in the Chest... I was weak.... I fell on a hard Large Rock... Then I saw Red Substance trickling from... And down my mouth..... Then It went black... I was back to where I was.... I still laid upon in Rons Arms... I thought About what happened in my dream... Then I turned to Ron again..... And I said," Lie to me..." Then you said..., "Im not going anywhere..." I thought about that.... About that Lie.... I was then Dreaming that We were Together.... We were in love..... You kissed upon me..... We broke apart..... I looked Into your eyes.... But your eyes were Focused somewhere else.... The I turned... Out Of Nowhere... Lavendar was there... and She said,"Come On Won-Won....." The Ron let go Of me... And Left me stranded.... Alone..... After what I thought I was back to Reality... Me and Ron Still Inclosed Together... Looking at the World..... Then I said..., "Tell me the Truth... Do you love me.....???" He looked Into My eyes...... "Yes...I do..." We had happy years together after... Me and Ron Got married..... Then A day came.... I was crying... Looking at you.... I said..,"Dont Die..... Lie to me.." And you were weak..... But you spoke these words.... that Came out of Your mouth..., "Im not going to die...." But then.... You died.... It was a fact..... You left..... I was all alone.... Without you Ron.... Im nothing... I loved you... and I will not stop Loving you.... Until The Day Ill draw My last Breath.... When Im dead... When Im no more.... I wont stop loving you... And that is not a lie... ########################## # I really didnt like it... But Yall might've... Anyways I will post another poem soon... -Xavier- AND GUYS CHECK OUT JESS&MARCYS FABTABULOUS SHOP OF GRAPHICS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ITS AWESOME...... THEY MADE MY AWESOME AVATAR!!! Last edited by ##Hermione&Draco##; 08-10-2009 at 04:20 PM.