 Fortress of Brilliance ღ Mommy Quad
Okay, I just finished. And you can call me Gracie  . Now, though I should be patient and just comment after your next chapter, I have that urge to comment right now.
Firstly, aw  You're welcome! Hehe. I definitely noticed all of those things, they weren't too obvious at all and I loved every bit of it. You're doing an amazing job, honestly. I'm going to have to read your drabbles!
And please, don't apologize!  You should be glad, being able to cause emotion like that in your readers is a good thing as far as I'm concerned. I meant it as a compliment.
One last thing that I absolutely had to include:
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To Harry, the words sounded rather empty as he recalled the family of fighters Teddy came from and how young they had all been when they died. Even the most recent, Andromeda, had only been in her late sixties when she had passed away a year earlier, which was hardly old for a muggle, let alone a witch. A surge of bitterness rose up in Harry’s throat. He saw Sirius laughing as he fell through the veil, Ted showing him where the portkey was, Tonks with blond hair at the wedding, Remus toasting the birth of his son, Andromeda green from dragon pox and now Teddy, limp and grey…
You are seriously going to make me cry one of these times. My eyes sting now  You are a brilliant writer, did I mention that before? *goes to see* You definitely paint the perfect picture with each chapter, often leaving me speechless and eager to read more and more.
Once again (for good measure  ), bravo!  *sets up beanbag chairs and waits for the next part*
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