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##Hermione&Draco## · 08-05-2009, 09:50 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by dracos.girl

Hey! It was really good! As usual

The breaks are a little weird, though. Can't wait for the other three!!

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My poems arent that great...
And ya..The other Three long poems are coming...
-Xavier-
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Quote:

Originally Posted by firenjen

OMG! dude your amazing keep going! the snape and lilly thing very nearly made me cry. i have a soft spot fo old snapey. wow

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Ok I will....
Ya that Snape and Lily one made me...
Almost Cry...
And Wow?
-Xavier-
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Quote:

Originally Posted by DFTBA

I like the poem

it's really good , GO On

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Thank you..
Thank you..
**I take a bow..**
I will Go on....
-Xavier-
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Quote:

Originally Posted by therealginnyweasly

wow xavier i 've only read the first poem but it was really good you described everything perfectly i saw it all in mind job well done
you are really creative i love these poems

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Ya I love the First Poem...
Wow you saw it in Your head???
And thank you...
I know Im Creative...I think..
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Quote:

Originally Posted by firenjen

dude, your awsome. i can tell you love what you do
I very nearly cried at this bit! you think of everything. i love it cos its not just about one thing, youve got the muggles the death eaters..EVERYONE!! more please

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Thank you...
Your awesome too....
Sure thing...
Im posting a poem now....
But It not One Of the Long poems...
-Xavier-
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Quote:

Originally Posted by Hermione<3Ron

I luffed it!

I have no more words to describe it because it was the best poem I have ever read...

Jess

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Thanks...
That means alot Jess...
-Xavier-
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Quote:

Originally Posted by hermionesclone

That was so sad! Those poor Muggles! I started crying so much! I loved it as ever! Great post! Can't wait for more!

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I know..
I feel sorry for the Muggles.....
-Xavier-
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Quote:

Originally Posted by Hermione<3Ron

hello?!?

more please!!!

we're waiting Xavierluffehh!!! xDDD

Jess

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Dont worry the Wait is over...
A new Poem Is up!!!
-Xavier-
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Hey Guys....
Ok well here is a new poem...
And its Not One Of those Long Poems....
Its just A regular Hp poem....
Just To inform Yall....
School Is coming around the Corner for me....
Very soon...
And to tell you that Im not Letting this Thread Close..
Im still Going to Write Poems...
But Not As often....
Ok??
Because This Year For Me is going to Be hard on Me...
So I hope You Understand...
So Here is the New Poem....
Thats Not One Of the Three Long Poems...
Just A regular HP Poem...
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Nine Tears...
I....
Only Allowed My...
Vulnerable Self..
To go through.
So much pain...
And Live with Myself...
No one else....
I dont blame them...
I'm Just Nothing....
Piece Of Dust..
Just Blowing Away...
The First Tear That I had Shed..
Was when...
You said..
Behind my back....
That No wonder...
I have no friends...
Which led me toward the Girls Bathroom...
Crying...
Sobbing...
And I almost Met My death...
Almost...
Crushed By a...
Fully-Grown..
Giant...
The Second...
Of the Nine Tears...
I was Kneeling down...
Right Beside My BestFriend....
He was weak....
He needed Me...
But just Seeing him..
Broken Down...
For he Just found out a piece...
OF evidence of...
Why His Parents Are Dead...
It hurt Me...
And Then...
I was Crying With Him...
Harry...
My Bestfriend...
The Third Tear....
Was When I watched....
A blade Chop...
BuckBeaks Head Off...
Death Was little to Me then...
But I know...
In Mere Time...
That I will See Death...
Overpowering Me...
Wrap Me...
Wherever I may Go...
Wherever Fate Leads Me....
Already To My Fourth Tear...
Full Of Emotions And Rage...
Bubbled Up inside me..
At The End Of The Yule Ball...
You said It was a mistake...
To Take Viktor Krum As My Date...
I Had No Choice...
For He asked me First....
And You waited...
And Used me...
As your last resort....
It hurt...
I felt Something...
A need to Want you..
Even..
More...
As I laid There on the Steps...
Crying....
Left with No one....
All alone...
Just me...
My Fifth Of The Nine Tears that Fell..
I was confused...
You suddenly appeared In the Room....
You were not Alone...
You were...
With,"Her."
So Lavendar And You can snog up here...
Fury....
Anger...
Jealousy...
Fustration...
Heartbroken...
Stabbed In the Back...
Despise...
Hate....
Unloved...
Not wanted...
All alone...
No one to Hold...
You love her...
Not me...
I tried to Hurt you...
But You stepped away...
And Left to Get your Kiss With Her....
Harry Beside me...
He held me...
I cried...
The 6th Tear...
It fell...
With The Memroies I had with Him...
Brave and True...
The Greatest Wizard I ever Knew...
He was Betrayed...
Decieved...
As I stood On A chair...
Crying....
At Your Funeral...
No one is safe anymore...
For Now your Dead..
Gone...
Dumbledore...
The Seventh...
Included alot Of Tears...
I put them...
All into One....
Because...
they all went...
They were Dead...
Mad-Eye-Moody...
So Fearless...
And A warrior...
I just Couldnt Believe He WAS GONE...
It was sad..
But True...
Dobby...
A mistreated HouseElf....
Lonely...
And Scared...
He sacrificed Himself...
To save Me Harry And Ron....
We buried Him Under The Ground...
It wasnt much...
But there was nothing else we could Do...
And Fred...
He died In the Battle Of Hogwarts..
Tonks...
And Lupin...
Both Dead...
But thier New Born Baby....
Alive...
But Now..
Without Parents...
All the Deaths Ive Seen...
And heard...
Ended...
For A world....
With Peace...
It was sad...
But Now...
Voldemort Was Now Dead...
The 8th Tear I shed....
Was when I went to Go Find My parents....
...And Refresh Their Minds...
When I met Them...
I said,"Im Your Daughter.."
And they said that They dont have a daughter...
It broke my heart...
Because Before I went to Hunt Horcruxes...
I had To use Magic...
So They Could Forget Everthing About Their Own Daughter...
But soon Enough I filled their Minds...
With Memories Of me...
And I was soon Back In their Arms Once more...
The Ninth Tear That I had Shed...
Was Beautiful....
We were joined together By love...
You said,"I Do."
It Was tears Of Joy...
And After That Ron Wiped My Tears Away,,
And Said,"I love You Hermione...
Then there was no more more tears from Then On....
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Hoped You liked It...
Love Yall...
-Xavier-

08-05-2009, 09:50 PM	#85 (permalink)
##Hermione&Draco## Puffskein Join Date: Jun 2009 Location: United States- TX Posts: 1,393 Hogwarts RPG Name: Mauricio Lucien Xanders Sixth Year	##Life Sucks,Then You Die.##- I am Misunderstood,Vulnerable,and In Love<3 Quote: Originally Posted by dracos.girl Hey! It was really good! As usual The breaks are a little weird, though. Can't wait for the other three!! =============================================== My poems arent that great... And ya..The other Three long poems are coming... -Xavier- =============================================== Quote: Originally Posted by firenjen OMG! dude your amazing keep going! the snape and lilly thing very nearly made me cry. i have a soft spot fo old snapey. wow =============================================== Ok I will.... Ya that Snape and Lily one made me... Almost Cry... And Wow? -Xavier- =============================================== Quote: Originally Posted by DFTBA I like the poem it's really good , GO On =============================================== Thank you.. Thank you.. I take a bow.. I will Go on.... -Xavier- =============================================== Quote: Originally Posted by therealginnyweasly wow xavier i 've only read the first poem but it was really good you described everything perfectly i saw it all in mind job well done you are really creative i love these poems ============================================= Ya I love the First Poem... Wow you saw it in Your head??? And thank you... I know Im Creative...I think.. =============================================== Quote: Originally Posted by firenjen dude, your awsome. i can tell you love what you do I very nearly cried at this bit! you think of everything. i love it cos its not just about one thing, youve got the muggles the death eaters..EVERYONE!! more please =============================================== Thank you... Your awesome too.... Sure thing... Im posting a poem now.... But It not One Of the Long poems... -Xavier- =============================================== Quote: Originally Posted by Hermione<3Ron I luffed it! I have no more words to describe it because it was the best poem I have ever read... Jess =============================================== Thanks... That means alot Jess... -Xavier- =============================================== Quote: Originally Posted by hermionesclone That was so sad! Those poor Muggles! I started crying so much! I loved it as ever! Great post! Can't wait for more! ============================================== I know.. I feel sorry for the Muggles..... -Xavier- =============================================== Quote: Originally Posted by Hermione<3Ron hello?!? more please!!! we're waiting Xavierluffehh!!! xDDD Jess =============================================== Dont worry the Wait is over... A new Poem Is up!!! -Xavier- ============================================= #########################* ########################## #### Hey Guys.... Ok well here is a new poem... And its Not One Of those Long Poems.... Its just A regular Hp poem.... Just To inform Yall.... School Is coming around the Corner for me.... Very soon... And to tell you that Im not Letting this Thread Close.. Im still Going to Write Poems... But Not As often.... Ok?? Because This Year For Me is going to Be hard on Me... So I hope You Understand... So Here is the New Poem.... Thats Not One Of the Three Long Poems... Just A regular HP Poem... ########################################## Nine Tears... I.... Only Allowed My... Vulnerable Self.. To go through. So much pain... And Live with Myself... No one else.... I dont blame them... I'm Just Nothing.... Piece Of Dust.. Just Blowing Away... The First Tear That I had Shed.. Was when... You said.. Behind my back.... That No wonder... I have no friends... Which led me toward the Girls Bathroom... Crying... Sobbing... And I almost Met My death... Almost... Crushed By a... Fully-Grown.. Giant... The Second... Of the Nine Tears... I was Kneeling down... Right Beside My BestFriend.... He was weak.... He needed Me... But just Seeing him.. Broken Down... For he Just found out a piece... OF evidence of... Why His Parents Are Dead... It hurt Me... And Then... I was Crying With Him... Harry... My Bestfriend... The Third Tear.... Was When I watched.... A blade Chop... BuckBeaks Head Off... Death Was little to Me then... But I know... In Mere Time... That I will See Death... Overpowering Me... Wrap Me... Wherever I may Go... Wherever Fate Leads Me.... Already To My Fourth Tear... Full Of Emotions And Rage... Bubbled Up inside me.. At The End Of The Yule Ball... You said It was a mistake... To Take Viktor Krum As My Date... I Had No Choice... For He asked me First.... And You waited... And Used me... As your last resort.... It hurt... I felt Something... A need to Want you.. Even.. More... As I laid There on the Steps... Crying.... Left with No one.... All alone... Just me... My Fifth Of The Nine Tears that Fell.. I was confused... You suddenly appeared In the Room.... You were not Alone... You were... With,"Her." So Lavendar And You can snog up here... Fury.... Anger... Jealousy... Fustration... Heartbroken... Stabbed In the Back... Despise... Hate.... Unloved... Not wanted... All alone... No one to Hold... You love her... Not me... I tried to Hurt you... But You stepped away... And Left to Get your Kiss With Her.... Harry Beside me... He held me... I cried... The 6th Tear... It fell... With The Memroies I had with Him... Brave and True... The Greatest Wizard I ever Knew... He was Betrayed... Decieved... As I stood On A chair... Crying.... At Your Funeral... No one is safe anymore... For Now your Dead.. Gone... Dumbledore... The Seventh... Included alot Of Tears... I put them... All into One.... Because... they all went... They were Dead... Mad-Eye-Moody... So Fearless... And A warrior... I just Couldnt Believe He WAS GONE... It was sad.. But True... Dobby... A mistreated HouseElf.... Lonely... And Scared... He sacrificed Himself... To save Me Harry And Ron.... We buried Him Under The Ground... It wasnt much... But there was nothing else we could Do... And Fred... He died In the Battle Of Hogwarts.. Tonks... And Lupin... Both Dead... But thier New Born Baby.... Alive... But Now.. Without Parents... All the Deaths Ive Seen... And heard... Ended... For A world.... With Peace... It was sad... But Now... Voldemort Was Now Dead... The 8th Tear I shed.... Was when I went to Go Find My parents.... ...And Refresh Their Minds... When I met Them... I said,"Im Your Daughter.." And they said that They dont have a daughter... It broke my heart... Because Before I went to Hunt Horcruxes... I had To use Magic... So They Could Forget Everthing About Their Own Daughter... But soon Enough I filled their Minds... With Memories Of me... And I was soon Back In their Arms Once more... The Ninth Tear That I had Shed... Was Beautiful.... We were joined together By love... You said,"I Do." It Was tears Of Joy... And After That Ron Wiped My Tears Away,, And Said,"I love You Hermione... Then there was no more more tears from Then On.... ##################### Hoped You liked It... Love Yall... -Xavier- Last edited by ##Hermione&Draco##; 08-14-2009 at 05:13 PM.