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Originally Posted by
SeerCassandraTrelawney
I liked it very much... now lets get some happy ones!
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Im glad you like it..
I should tell you...
That whatever my feeling is..
It will affect the mood of my Hp poems...
And now I dont feel good...
So prepare for some sad poems...
Sorry...
Your Friend,
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Originally Posted by
hermionesclone
Wow! You portrayed Tom perfectly! It totally shows his personality and what he is like! Well done! It was a really good poem! Can't wait for more!
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Thank you..
You are very kind...
Ill post another poem soon...
I promise....
your friend,
-Xavier-================================================== ================================================== ================ Quote:
Originally Posted by
Hermione<3Ron
Xavierluff that was amazing!!
I loved it sooo muchh!!
It really shows Tom Riddle's personality.
Great Job!!!
Your bestest buddy,
Jess (Jessica) lol
P.S. I will get you more readers!

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Jessluff!!!!!!!!
Im glad you liked it
Aww..
Im your Bestest buddy...
I feel soo loved..
Oh and your I like your full name dont cover it up..
I think its wonderful..
Thank you for trying to get readers for me..
It means alot..
Ill post a poem soon...
YOUR BESTEST BUDDY,
-Xavier-
P.S. I miss you!!!!!
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Hello Guys...
How are yall???
I would like to say thank you to yall for supporting me...
Well...
Here is a Hp poem I wrote..
Hope ypu like it..
And just to tell you its not a happy poem..
#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#*#* #*#*#*#*# Black Smoke
The Clock Bell Rang...
Ringing...
Ringing...
Loud...
And Heavy....
Scary.....
I was just sitting....
Then.
I was suddenly at the Town Hall..
But I wasnt alone...
Every person from our town...
Was here....
The Bell rang once more....
Everything went dark....
Then Lightning shot up in the air...
In those quick seconds...
Of blinding light....
I saw....
With every lightning shot...
A New dark hooded figure appeared...
Right in the middle of the street....
With a big bang...
The lightning once again struck...
Then..
Around my people of the town...
Every eletric,moving thing..
Stopped...
And A small piece of light shined....
Toward the people in mask.....
Some people yelled...
But I wasnt afraid at all...
The man in the middle said...
With a happy..content tone...,
"Your prime minister....
Is dead....
There are other people within your world..
Hiding...
And Un-discovered...
There are wizards...
Magic exsist....
Dont deny it...
You filthy Muggles...
As yall live Unharmed...
And untouched....
Something has brought up...
There is.
A war...
You see...
I.
And my Fellow DeathEaters...
Are loyal to A Person...
With great power not even a regular wizard has...
He soon shall have the wizarding world in his grasp..
And by the looks of it...
You need someone to lead...
And take the postition of being your Prime Minister....
Lord Voldemort...
Will now be your leader...
If you break any rules...
The punishment..
Is Death.
Does anyone have any objections?"
'No one spoke up....
I was shocked....
I couldnt believe wizards exsisted...
But I belived this person named
Lord Voldemort...
Couldnt be nice....
Bad things were happening to the other wizards....
Us...
I think the correct term...
As the wizards called us..
Muggles?
We needed to make a stand...'
The Deatheater nodded...
As no one seemed to be objecting...
And said,
"Wise choice muggles...
I shall see that Our..
Lord Voldemort doesnt kill yall...
Not until for another week...
Goodbye."
Lightning flashed once more....
When I opened my eyes...
The sun shined once more....
And the so called,
"DeathEaters.."
Were gone...
And the electricity and every moving thing...
Worked again...
Then.
"What the Hell???!!!
How did I end up back here??!!!"
I was back in my house..
sitting....
A war between us humans..
And Dark wizards is going to begin...
to be continued
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Ok let me explain...
There is going to be four long poems....
This is the first poem..
But I ended it short..
Because this poem is long...
And I want to leave the rest of this first out of four long poems...
As a cliffhanger...
Well I hoped you liked it so far...
And trust me...
THERE IS ALOT MORE TO COME
I just need a few more new readers...
Your friend,
Xavier