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Originally Posted by
hermionesclone 
Aw! That was so sad and yet so sweet! I can't believe it! I felt so sorry for Ginny! It was so sad on her! It felt so real. As if in HBP, that's what she's thinking. Loved it to bits! Can't wait for more!
================================================== ================================================== ================ Ya it was sad..
And it was real...
I went through that...
Except Im a boy...
But that is Life I guess...
Im going to post another poem today...
I hope you like it...
Your friend,
Xavier
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Originally Posted by
SeerCassandraTrelawney I really liked it!
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You are very kind....
I hope you like my last poem...
Your friend,
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Originally Posted by
Hermione<3Ron Xavier!!!
That was amazing!!
I loved the whole story part of it!
Ahhh I hate Fenrir
Great Job!!
&& I loved your other poem too!!!
Jess
P.S. I only had a little bit of time to come on the laptop, Germany is amazing!
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**I snuggle in your arms..**
I hate fenrir too...
Im writing another poem now...
I hope you are having a great time in Germany
I miss you!!!!!
Your bestest buddy,
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Originally Posted by
LilyLunaGinnyPotter Oh my god!
That was so sad!
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All my poems are mostly sad...
Im posting another poem now...
Hope you like it!!!!
You friend,
Xavier ================================================== ================================================== ================
Hello Everyone!!!!
Here is a poem...
Please read and review...
Thank you
...
I hope you like it...
################################################## ################################################## #### Whats Underneath His Skin
Pale skin...
Dark hair...
That covered his face...
It was Hiding...
Hiding the truth...
Only Some...
They see it in his eyes....
According to all the teachers...
Of Hogwarts...
They would say...
That he was nice...
They cant see what hides....
He holds a wand...
Against a student's chest....
"What were you saying about me...???"
He seemed vulnerable...
He was unprotected...
His weak voice said...,
"I said I was sorry..-
I was just joking-
playing around..."
Tom Riddle just studied him...
The smell of fear...
"Not so brave are you...
Where are your friends...
No one will save you...
You made fun of me....
And you will suffer....
You didnt think that I..
Tom Riddle..
can protect himself....
I have you..
with no protection...
No one shall see who I really am..."
The boy was against the wall..
Scared....
and said...,
"No one?"
Tom riddle whispered in his ear..,
"Goodbye..."
Red was splattered on the wall...
The scene Shifted...
Charming...
Sensitive....
A person you can relate to....
If you get too close...
He will soon be in control of you....
Make you do wrong...
Make you hurt people...
Say goodbye to your will power...
For he is too much for you...
And soon you will be dead like the rest..
After he is done using you...
After you have been too drawn to him....
But too late your dead...
He walks the hall...
Some people think he never does anything wrong...
He has pureblood friends...
His past says different...
He is embarrased..
Ashamed of his family...
His past...
His first year at Hogwarts..
All he had to do..
Is fake his identity...
Just simple words..
Like...
"Im pureblood"
Can Change his life...
He takes walks after dark....
All he wants to be...
Is immortal..
And thats what he intends to be...
If it would take killings...
It didnt mind to him...
He killed once...
No twice...
Maybe three...
But no one will notice how he really is...
Because no one really sees...
Whats really underneath his skin...
Just only the people...
Well lets just say....
They are with the dead...
Now..
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Hoped you liked it...
To be honest not one of my favorites...
But still it was an Hp poem...
Please read and review..And Im happy all of you..
Arent giving up on reading my poetry....
But I wish I had more readers...
But I glad I have you....
Thank you for being here for me..
Your friend,
Xavier
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