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##Hermione&Draco## · 07-04-2009, 05:45 PM

Hey guys here is the second short poem!!!
I hope you enjoy it!
I hope you also have a great Forth of July

Goodbye..Forever
The cold wind blew across Harry's face..
He knelt down in the snow..
and looked at his parents grave..
He was wearing worn out jeans..
His broken wand was stuffed in his pants..
tears rolled down his face..
His T-shirt was torn..
while he had cuts upon his face..
his hands were getting
tighter
and
tighter..
as he felt angry and sad that his parents..
the ones who sacrificed their lives for their baby child..
laid there..
buried inside the ground..
and the only memory of them was the writing
on their tombstones..
that laid upon their dead bodies..
It was pain to him..
the world stop turning for a second..
as he was crying...
sobbing..
over..
his parent's death..
He felt a warm hand upon his shoulder..
it was Hermione..
Bruised..
and scarred up..
with tears upon her face..
Her bestfriend was vulnerable..
kneeling upon death..
his parents death..
He never really got to spend much time with them
because when he was little then..
She had to remind him that there was still a task ahead..
he slapped her arm..
right off his shoulder..
While Hermione was crying more than ever..
For she was seeing him..broken down like this..
It made her sad..
He didnt want to leave them..
For what his parents did for him..
was just too painful..
just thinking that his mother..
Lily mourned and screamed to dont take his life away..
Voldemort didnt show no mercy..
And killed her..
that sent her laying on the ground..
While the Dad had bloodstains upon his body..
and he was also dead..
he was peaceful..
In his eternal sleep..
And the poor..
innocent.. baby Harry was still alive..
After Voldemort said the killing curse..
and left him crying..
For he didnt know any better..
That his parents were dead..
Harry came up to his feet..
he looked again at his parents graves..
kissed both of their tombstones..
and wished them a..,
"Goodbye.." Forever..
HOPED YOU LIKED IT!!!!
I love you all my readers

Thank you for giving me a shot and reading my poems..
Please review..
Love,
Xavier

07-04-2009, 05:45 PM	#30 (permalink)
##Hermione&Draco## Puffskein Join Date: Jun 2009 Location: United States- TX Posts: 1,393 Hogwarts RPG Name: Mauricio Lucien Xanders Sixth Year	##Life Sucks,Then You Die.##- I am Misunderstood,Vulnerable,and In Love<3 Hey guys here is the second short poem!!! I hope you enjoy it! I hope you also have a great Forth of July Goodbye..Forever The cold wind blew across Harry's face.. He knelt down in the snow.. and looked at his parents grave.. He was wearing worn out jeans.. His broken wand was stuffed in his pants.. tears rolled down his face.. His T-shirt was torn.. while he had cuts upon his face.. his hands were getting tighter and tighter.. as he felt angry and sad that his parents.. the ones who sacrificed their lives for their baby child.. laid there.. buried inside the ground.. and the only memory of them was the writing on their tombstones.. that laid upon their dead bodies.. It was pain to him.. the world stop turning for a second.. as he was crying... sobbing.. over.. his parent's death.. He felt a warm hand upon his shoulder.. it was Hermione.. Bruised.. and scarred up.. with tears upon her face.. Her bestfriend was vulnerable.. kneeling upon death.. his parents death.. He never really got to spend much time with them because when he was little then.. She had to remind him that there was still a task ahead.. he slapped her arm.. right off his shoulder.. While Hermione was crying more than ever.. For she was seeing him..broken down like this.. It made her sad.. He didnt want to leave them.. For what his parents did for him.. was just too painful.. just thinking that his mother.. Lily mourned and screamed to dont take his life away.. Voldemort didnt show no mercy.. And killed her.. that sent her laying on the ground.. While the Dad had bloodstains upon his body.. and he was also dead.. he was peaceful.. In his eternal sleep.. And the poor.. innocent.. baby Harry was still alive.. After Voldemort said the killing curse.. and left him crying.. For he didnt know any better.. That his parents were dead.. Harry came up to his feet.. he looked again at his parents graves.. kissed both of their tombstones.. and wished them a.., "Goodbye.." Forever.. HOPED YOU LIKED IT!!!! I love you all my readers Thank you for giving me a shot and reading my poems.. Please review.. Love, Xavier Last edited by ##Hermione&Draco##; 07-15-2009 at 07:46 PM.